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by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:42 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One - preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 106

Re: Project One - preliminary

Hi Ashley,

Both of your design are awesome to look at! The do have an older web feel to them which is really fun, my favorite is the star design. The only thing I'd tweak is the spacing, everything feels just a little smushed together.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:38 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 112

Re: Project 01 Preliminary

Hi Lakelyn,

Both of your designs are great. They're both very calming to look at, I especially liked the green design! My only suggestion would be, add more space to the frame around your name in the desktop rough to match the mobile rough.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:34 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 145

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Quentin,

I really like how streamlined both of your designs feel but still have that pop of fun, especially the first one. It really comes through that you put a lot of consideration into your designs!
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary
Replies: 10
Views: 129

Re: Project One Preliminary

Hi Ryan,

I really like your second design, the font you used for your name is very eye catching which I think works awesome for an 'about me' page. I'd only say that the page does feel a bit empty, maybe play around more with the space left over.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 01 preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 123

Re: project 01 preliminary

Hi Damiano,

It's great how both designs have a very clear layout, I especially liked the first design. I'd only say that the green/yellow contrast is quite harsh on the eye.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Work
Replies: 11
Views: 120

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Work

Hi Kai,

I really liked how both of your designs are quite bold (in opposite directions). I especially liked the second one, it's both minimalist and in your face and the font really matches the style.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:14 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Preliminary
Replies: 9
Views: 75

Re: Project01 Preliminary

Hi Adrian,

Wow! Both of your designs look really fun and easy to navigate, I especially liked the fish themed one. The only suggestion I have is perhaps play around with the color of the fish with the project links, they blend into the blue background.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:08 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Work
Replies: 13
Views: 120

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Work

Hi Adrian,

I like how both of your designs are easy to navigate, both have all the information really visible. I'd say I liked the layout of the yellow one a bit more, but the blue palette was definitely easier on the eyes.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 4:04 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 121

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Hi Kym,

It's cool that you went with such varying designs, they're both really creative but the first design with the cityscape was definitely a standout to me. I especially liked the colors, however I noticed that all the colors were really saturated which made it hard to read the information.
by fionahdez⋆˚✿˖°(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*
Wed Feb 19, 2025 3:58 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 182

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Kendra, I really liked both of your designs. Especially the second one! I'd suggest maybe trying to add more color to the text boxes since the background image is very monochrome.