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by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 144

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hello! Your compositions looks so striking and its amazing! I like how your picture stands out against everything else but it still fits in and doesn't take away too much attention. It does what it needs to do! I feel like you accomplished a really good balance in your first one, the second design s...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 110

Re: Project 01 Preliminary

Hey! The patterns you've added to your designs are super cool and fit in really well! The leafy one is my personally fav but the X and O are also visually appealing. They both contrast each other in a good way! The mobile version for the green one, I would play around with the top of the layout as e...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:22 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 01 preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 113

Re: project 01 preliminary

Hi! Both of your designs have a good layout structure and nothing feels out of place. I especially enjoy the second one due to how you've set up the project links and your picture is very front and center. If you were wanting to go with your first design, changing up the colors to be less vibrant an...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:20 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 9
Views: 161

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hello! The old newspaper idea is a really unique choice and I'm so into it! Both of your designs really show how you've played with this idea. Comparing the two, the one with m ore muted colors works best as it makes everything feel more calm, just how I feel a newspaper works. The way your set up y...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:16 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary
Replies: 10
Views: 127

Re: Project One Preliminary

Hi!
I like how simplistic yet readable your roughs are, out of the two i feel like your second one has a super strong layout and the blue works really well against the white background. I like how you set up your pictures and links! The font you chose is also really fun and catches the eye easily.
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Preliminary
Replies: 10
Views: 105

Re: Project 01 Preliminary

Hello! I really like both of your designs, the first one i feel has a really good color palette. Its very comforting and flows together. the layout and composition on the mobile version looks really good, although the website version doesn't feel as put together. Your picture feels like its floating...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Work
Replies: 11
Views: 117

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Work

Hello! While its very simple i thing the white and black concept is your best one! Its not distracting but still draws your eye in a really fun way! Your second has a really good sense of layout, everything is set up in a way that makes sense, the white on the yellowish orange is a bit hard to read ...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:06 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 118

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Hello! The first design you did is absolutely stunning! The colors work so well together and its very appealing to the eye. Your second design has a really good setup, the colors you chose are slightly off and don't work well together as a harmony. It would be fun to see more vibrate colors in that ...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One - preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 103

Re: Project One - preliminary

Hi Ashley! I love how you were inspired my older my space vibes! I can definitely see the vision in your roughs. Some of your text is a little warped here and there but my favorite composition you did was the first mobile design! It feels well put together and its really easy to read. If you match t...
by Adrian_Brewster
Fri Feb 21, 2025 7:58 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary
Replies: 10
Views: 136

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary

Hey Fiona! I love the colors you picked for both of your designs, they go really well with each other. Its really well done! I enjoy the simplicity of your first design and find it set up nicely. I am more drawn to your second and fond the jellyfish to be really cute! I'm curious to see if there was...