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- Wed May 07, 2014 3:40 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project #3 - Prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3616
Re: Project #3 - Prelim
I'm enjoying the first concept a lot more It's more pleasing to the eye, to say the least Question: Is that your picture of the overhead shot of the Sierra building? If so, how the hell did you take it? lolol Great job!
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:35 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project_3 prelim
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2790
Re: project_3 prelim
The second design is definitely the stronger out of the two concepts. I would use a somewhat less expressive type for your headline? The messy headline type conflicts with your clean concept and illustration, in my opinion. Regardless though, great job! (Make the illustration bigger? I really enjoy ...
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:31 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: G. R. to the WHAT WHAT C.... lol.
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3759
Re: G. R. to the WHAT WHAT C.... lol.
I'd go with the second one and enlarge your nav bar. I honestly couldn't tell if you had one for a few seconds because your typefaces are too similar in size. Great start though
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:25 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: It's the final countdown...
- Replies: 16
- Views: 5031
Re: It's the final countdown...
I like the first concept somewhat better. Both are amazing, but the layout of the first flows better in my opinion. The only issue is the first background image. I would change it, if you decide to stick with it
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:21 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project three concepts
- Replies: 17
- Views: 4296
Re: project three concepts
Although I love the first one, it does make me want to hit up a local club So, I would definitely stick with the second one.
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:18 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project_3_roughs
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3621
Re: project_3_roughs
I'm loving the last design. It's very expressive and unique. I would fix what little contrast issues you have and stick with it! Great job
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:06 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project 3
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3793
Re: project 3
I'm liking the second layout more as well. One thing I would change would be the color of your text. The bright green is not sitting right with me lol I love that picture though. I might have to steal it from you tomorrow
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:03 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3516
Re: Project 3 Prelim
I'm loving the first one a bit more. It's easier to read by far, but I would shrink the fonts on your nav bar because I'm having issues with the boarders touching the words lol Great job though!
- Wed May 07, 2014 3:01 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4223
Re: Project 3 Preliminary
I'm loving the illustrations in the background, but I'm going to have to agree with everyone and say that you need to have way less text, or at least make your text box have two columns? Make sure that your text isn't long enough to bore the reader, but isn't short enough to brake apart what you're ...
- Wed May 07, 2014 2:56 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary for Project 3 - Elizabeth Mejia
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3470
Re: Preliminary for Project 3 - Elizabeth Mejia
Haha I'm loving the second concept a lot more. It's easier to read. Great job