original site : http://www.gurdjieff.org/pentland2.htm
my two roughs:
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- Sun Apr 13, 2014 11:26 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: pr2_roughs_oasib
- Replies: 0
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- Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:26 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Farmville
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4258
Re: Farmville
Simular layouts,but if I have to pick from two images you used as your header I would go with the brown one with role of hay. I think it is a nice image that caputers farm batter then the other picture. great roughs, well orgonized!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:22 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project #2 Preliminary Critique pixyland.org
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3656
Re: Project #2 Preliminary Critique pixyland.org
hmmm, cant see your vision clearly, lets see your colored roughs!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:18 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project #2 - Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4257
Re: Project #2 - Prelim
Very nice job on your roughs!!! they both look great, i like the first design becsue it has a very strong image and logo that pops in the home page. Gives it dominance and confidence to the business! But ether option you pick they both well designed and organized, great start!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:14 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: project 2
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3539
Re: project 2
as of right now it is difficult to tell, lets see your color roughs!!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:13 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Matt Shockney P2 Prelim Juices
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4074
Re: Matt Shockney P2 Prelim Juices
The blue one has a calming feeling to it, I would go with that option. The black rought is little bet to busy, but there are good illustrations there. The blue version looks simple to navigate. Anyways great work on both of them!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:09 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: project two
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3903
Re: project two
Look like there is something interesting going on, but without color and it being vertical it hard to tell exactly what is your consent, let see you color versions!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:07 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary-The Wal
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3933
Re: Project 2 Preliminary-The Wal
I would go with the first idea, it has a better layout and balance! good job!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:59 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: pre lim project 2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3978
Re: pre lim project 2
I like the rought 1, the pictures that you use, I think you need to do something about that logo in the white box, it is out of place as of now. I thnk if you add some home buttons and fix that logo it will look nice! good luck!
- Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:56 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: H. Williams Preliminary Critique Project 2
- Replies: 18
- Views: 4547
Re: H. Williams Preliminary Critique Project 2
Great roughts!!! both look amazing, i like the first one because it is more bold and it has red color in it. Red color rises person’s blood pressure, heart rate, and causes hunger to be more prevalent. Eather way u go, they both look amazing!!