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by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 11:26 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: pr2_roughs_oasib
Replies: 0
Views: 1030

pr2_roughs_oasib

original site : http://www.gurdjieff.org/pentland2.htm

my two roughs:
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:26 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Farmville
Replies: 16
Views: 4258

Re: Farmville

Simular layouts,but if I have to pick from two images you used as your header I would go with the brown one with role of hay. I think it is a nice image that caputers farm batter then the other picture. great roughs, well orgonized!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:22 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project #2 Preliminary Critique pixyland.org
Replies: 13
Views: 3656

Re: Project #2 Preliminary Critique pixyland.org

hmmm, cant see your vision clearly, lets see your colored roughs!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:18 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project #2 - Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 4257

Re: Project #2 - Prelim

Very nice job on your roughs!!! they both look great, i like the first design becsue it has a very strong image and logo that pops in the home page. Gives it dominance and confidence to the business! But ether option you pick they both well designed and organized, great start!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:14 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: project 2
Replies: 14
Views: 3539

Re: project 2

as of right now it is difficult to tell, lets see your color roughs!!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:13 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Matt Shockney P2 Prelim Juices
Replies: 16
Views: 4074

Re: Matt Shockney P2 Prelim Juices

The blue one has a calming feeling to it, I would go with that option. The black rought is little bet to busy, but there are good illustrations there. The blue version looks simple to navigate. Anyways great work on both of them!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:09 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: project two
Replies: 15
Views: 3903

Re: project two

Look like there is something interesting going on, but without color and it being vertical it hard to tell exactly what is your consent, let see you color versions!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:07 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary-The Wal
Replies: 16
Views: 3933

Re: Project 2 Preliminary-The Wal

I would go with the first idea, it has a better layout and balance! good job!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:59 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: pre lim project 2
Replies: 15
Views: 3978

Re: pre lim project 2

I like the rought 1, the pictures that you use, I think you need to do something about that logo in the white box, it is out of place as of now. I thnk if you add some home buttons and fix that logo it will look nice! good luck!
by oasib
Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:56 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: H. Williams Preliminary Critique Project 2
Replies: 18
Views: 4547

Re: H. Williams Preliminary Critique Project 2

Great roughts!!! both look amazing, i like the first one because it is more bold and it has red color in it. Red color rises person’s blood pressure, heart rate, and causes hunger to be more prevalent. Eather way u go, they both look amazing!!