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by Sierragirlnv
Fri Oct 17, 2014 12:01 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project #2
Replies: 15
Views: 3521

Re: project #2

Hi Elizabeth, I like the logo you designed it's simple and clean. I was a Kiwanis member in high school and I still have no idea what the point of the organization was. I think the colors could be a little DE saturated. I know you used actual colors from the national website but a bright blue like t...
by Sierragirlnv
Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:57 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
Replies: 17
Views: 3926

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP

Hi there, I like where you are going with this idea...I can see popcorn and those red and white striped containers in the back round somewhere because the feel it is taking on is it's an old fashioned theater. I looked up the actual website and that is pretty awful with the rainbow colored gradient ...
by Sierragirlnv
Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:49 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
Replies: 17
Views: 3799

Re: Roughs2_by_Amy

Hi Amy, I like the first layout because of the simplicity of the user interface. However, the grey color choice is not something I would be comfortable with a "children's hospital" because black and grey can be foreboding. I like the city-scape in the back-round but i'm not sure that commu...
by Sierragirlnv
Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:44 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
Replies: 14
Views: 3357

Re: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique

Hi Georgia, I think I like the first layout best because what is a zoo all about...the animals! I do think the cheetah print is a little excessive. I like how you chose playful color choices because I think the audience is children and families. I think if you took away a little and added some more ...
by Sierragirlnv
Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:42 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs - Seth Dines
Replies: 16
Views: 3594

Re: Project 2 Roughs - Seth Dines

Hi Seth, I am leaning towards your first layout since it has an all one feature and its layout is very current. I do like the idea of the second layout but I don't know that it effectively communicates the idea to the visitor. I see the "client" likes a minimalistic approach that I think t...
by Sierragirlnv
Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:36 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 19
Views: 4132

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Hi Ashley, Great job on your roughs. I like the second layout because it has a homemade appeal but the imagery as awesome as it is reflects very high end culinary tastes. Take the anise seeds in the photo I don't know of any pizza recipes that would call for a spice like that. I looked at that parti...
by Sierragirlnv
Thu Oct 16, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Rough Ideas....
Replies: 15
Views: 3390

Project Two Rough Ideas....

So I chose some pretty bad websites but the winner was...(wait for it) http://cavs.mit.edu/index.html I will include a jpeg of the home page in case you are too lazy to click on it. It took a while to figure out exactly what I was looking at and to figure out an idea. I looked at several other schoo...
by Sierragirlnv
Fri Oct 10, 2014 2:11 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1_cp
Replies: 8
Views: 2184

Re: Project 1_cp

Hi Candace, I don't know why i didn't see your final until now? Anyways I like the repetition in your design, the colors, type, and beveling. I noticed the photo you used draws my eye straight to the light shining through the tree and it seems a little distracting. Otherwise good job. I know you sai...
by Sierragirlnv
Thu Oct 02, 2014 1:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 16
Views: 3907

Re: Project One Final

Hi Ashley, I like that you went with red. When in doubt always go with the red one...haha that's my motto anyways. I think it has great balance to it. I like the layout and the photo on the bottom is a good choice to go with black and white. Your site definitely "pops". Great job! Sierragi...
by Sierragirlnv
Thu Oct 02, 2014 1:26 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one final
Replies: 17
Views: 3796

Re: Project one final

Hi Paula,
I like the way you balanced your layout between the image and the paragraph. You used earthy natural colors which invoke a calming feel to it. The only criticism I can say is maybe make the type a smudge bigger, otherwise great job!

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