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by wendy_boddy
Thu Oct 23, 2014 4:00 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
Replies: 17
Views: 4074

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP

The marquee logo is great! I'd make the show posters all the same size there on the right or the top page.

-wendy
by wendy_boddy
Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:49 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2_Preliminary comps
Replies: 15
Views: 3460

Re: Project 2_Preliminary comps

I'm not sure what happened but I have had to redo a bunch of my critiques? I wrote yours last night? anyway, I live the top one with the warm embossed leather background. It makes the pictures pop! Plus turquoise really contrasts with brown very well. Good job on both. You are an awesome designer. w...
by wendy_boddy
Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:45 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 19
Views: 4314

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

I love the paper cut out look, but the page 2 layout and images are so beautiful they should definitely be your final. Even though you don't see a pizza, the herbs are so appetizing. Good choices on the page 2 layout!

-wendy
by wendy_boddy
Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:41 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
Replies: 17
Views: 3938

Re: Roughs2_by_Amy

I like that you have the city in the background, but I would not use the gray throughout the website as a main color. Maybe a cream or taupe with the black. Or two shades of the same color, but something bright and happy because it is a pediatrics website.
The scrolling page works great!

wendy
by wendy_boddy
Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:34 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3570

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs

Nice job on both. I love the silhouettes on the brown version. I prefer the brown one because it draws my eye in with the warm colors and the layering of silhouettes. It haas depth.

wendy
by wendy_boddy
Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:28 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 16
Views: 3732

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Looks good!
I like the speedometers on the bottom.
Looking forward to seeing your flushed out version.
wendy
by wendy_boddy
Wed Oct 22, 2014 9:48 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 17
Views: 3983

Re: Project 2 Roughs

The beer image you chose in rough two is a very nice background. The rough one isn't bad, but the red background with yellow text is a little rough on the eyes. The beer image with wood background IS very pleasing to the eyes. Maybe implement the blue and white afrom the Bavarian flag vs. the red an...
by wendy_boddy
Wed Oct 22, 2014 9:42 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
Replies: 17
Views: 3938

Re: Roughs2_by_Amy

I think both designs are a good start. I do however think the greyscale backgrounds for either is a little dark for a pediatrics website. i would play with color for either design. I would choose a color palette from one of the websites that have color wheels and stick with a set of colors. I'm thin...
by wendy_boddy
Wed Oct 22, 2014 9:32 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2_Preliminary comps
Replies: 15
Views: 3460

Re: Project 2_Preliminary comps

What happened to the line ... "A real Western store for real cowboys" ? lol. IThe contrast of turquoise and brown is one of my favorites. I'm loving the top one. The background image choice is warm and inviting, but also makes the images pop. The left hand navigation bar is very easy to re...
by wendy_boddy
Wed Oct 22, 2014 9:24 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 19
Views: 4314

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Great job on creating two very different websites! Even though I am a fan of the cut out paper look, the bottom website is gorgeous and makes me want to eat. It's warm, inviting, very creative and organized. Good job on that site!

wendy