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by mlauc
Wed Oct 22, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
Replies: 17
Views: 3976

Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique

Hi Wendy, Wow, these are awesome! You picked a doozy to redesign! I like the rose gold, reptile background the best. It really makes the colorful photos pop out. The side navigation makes sense with so much content. The logo in the green comp has a very slithery quality about it — that's got my vote...
by mlauc
Wed Oct 22, 2014 10:08 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
Replies: 17
Views: 3912

Re: Roughs2_by_Amy

Hi Amy,

I like the scrolling, one-page design the best. I suggest a more colorful background rather than the gray since this is a pediatrician's office.
Nice work!
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:21 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project Two_Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3618

Re: Project Two_Roughs

Hi Paula, I like both of your designs. I am leaning toward the 2nd rough with the name in a handwriting script, I think the blue logo contrasts nicely against the dark brown. I also like the addition of a native american pattern to give the site personality. For the about page, I suggest more enviro...
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:58 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project Two Rough Ideas....
Replies: 15
Views: 3554

Re: Project Two Rough Ideas....

Hi Tiffani, First of all, I'm shocked that this site is affiliated with MIT! It's so unprofessional and confusing. Both of your roughs have an upscale feel that do a better job of reflecting the prestigiousness of the school. I like the 2nd comp with the large chalkboard and equation image on the ho...
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:31 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Projecr 2 Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3386

Re: Projecr 2 Roughs

Hi Kiwako, Wow, you did pick a good site to re-design! I really like the friendly appeal of your second rough. The wood background warms up the feel of the site while also conveying a sense of history. I suggest jazzing up the name to give it more personality. The "Event" hero shot would b...
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:19 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Lingling's roughs for project 2
Replies: 15
Views: 3992

Re: Lingling's roughs for project 2

Hi Lingling, I like what you've done with the logo design, it has fun, colorful origami quality that makes sense with the subject matter. I like rough 1 but I suggest changing the color of "Excellence in Education" to add more contrast. I would also include images that help convey the mess...
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:05 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
Replies: 17
Views: 4052

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP

Hi Candace,

I like how you've highlighted the neon sign and pulled in the green accent color. It would be fun to add the vintage, neon sign look to the navigation as you scroll over each category. The san serif font is a good choice, it's modern and easy to read.

Great job!
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 2:51 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3799

Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique

Hi Steven,

I like the composition of the first rough with the logo at the top left. I also like your design idea for the logo, I look forward to seeing how it turns out.
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 2:43 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 17
Views: 3959

Re: Project 2 Roughs

Hi,

I like rough 1 but the copy is difficult to read over the image. I suggest moving it to the right of the beer and maybe reducing the amount of text.
I imagine that the main image will change based on the category to incorporate more food.

Nice job!
by mlauc
Mon Oct 20, 2014 2:32 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 - roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3648

Re: Project 2 - roughs

Hi Rosa, I really like the re-design of the site. It looks much more professional and organized. Your font choices are a huge improvement, (Shelley script, really?) I'm leaning toward the composition of the second rough but I really like the colors of the first. I would also consider re-designing th...