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by aslychsm
Fri Oct 17, 2014 9:23 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
Replies: 14
Views: 3360

Re: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique

These are both exciting and interesting to look at, but in different ways. I love your color choices in the second rough, they all balance each other and work well together. But I really like all the photos you used on your first design, and how they create textures and visual interest. What I reall...
by aslychsm
Fri Oct 17, 2014 9:04 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
Replies: 17
Views: 3801

Re: Roughs2_by_Amy

I like both of your designs. They have a very organized and clean feel about them, which is important for a pediatric website. The concept of one long scrolling website is really cool, and it would probably work well for this assignment, but I think for a healthcare website, having individual pages ...
by aslychsm
Fri Oct 17, 2014 8:55 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3503

Re: Project 2 - roughs

You did an amazing job on these! Everything about them is so neat, and visually interesting, as my eyes can't stop moving around the page. One aspect I really enjoy, is how strategically placed all your text is. Even though there is a lot of text, it doesn't overwhelm the viewer because of how you s...
by aslychsm
Fri Oct 17, 2014 8:38 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
Replies: 17
Views: 3928

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP

(You should post a link to the original website, just so all of us can compare, and see how much you improved it!) You did a great job putting this together. I definitely get a 'movie theater' vibe from the finished product. Also, the fact that the website didn't have movie posters/trailers/etc is c...
by aslychsm
Fri Oct 17, 2014 8:24 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project #2
Replies: 15
Views: 3530

Re: project #2

Awesome job on these! I especially like how you created a logo to go with your whole design, that really bumps up the credibility of the website in my eyes. In addition, you chose the color blue, not because it's your favorite color, but because it has significance to the business, which makes your ...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 9:53 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 19
Views: 4141

Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Hi, all. My name is Ashley, and this is the preliminary for project 2. For this assignment we needed to find a poorly put together website, and use our magic to make it better. For my website redesign I chose this one .. http://www.joesplacepizzaandpasta.com/ I knew immediately that I wanted to do a...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 7:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Lingling's roughs for project 2
Replies: 15
Views: 3865

Re: Lingling's roughs for project 2

These are great! I like how you went with the clean and simple approach for your designs. Both have nice composition, and are really pleasing to look at because of their symmetry. My favorite is your second rough, I like the subdued blues, especially for a website promoting education, as it has a ve...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 7:01 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3384

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

How fun! These are good. I think you did a great job reorganizing the site to make it more navigable. I especially like all the little details you included to keep your redesigns similar to the original website. If I had to choose, I'd honestly go with the first layout you posted, primarily because ...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 6:45 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2_Preliminary comps
Replies: 15
Views: 3331

Re: Project 2_Preliminary comps

Wow. This feels and looks like something already available online. I immediately want to look through all the pages and browse through the merchandise. Can't think of much else to add, both of these are superb! I'm jealous. The first design is my favorite, it has this dark, ritzy vibe, and looks lik...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 6:25 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 17
Views: 3818

Re: Project 2 Roughs

That's a pretty bad website you chose to redesign, but there's a lot of room to get creative. I'll start off first by saying I thought your roughs were for an independent business that crafts beer, I didn't really get a 'restaurant' vibe from your designs. I know they specialize in beer, so maybe it...