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- Fri Oct 17, 2014 9:23 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3360
Re: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
These are both exciting and interesting to look at, but in different ways. I love your color choices in the second rough, they all balance each other and work well together. But I really like all the photos you used on your first design, and how they create textures and visual interest. What I reall...
- Fri Oct 17, 2014 9:04 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3801
Re: Roughs2_by_Amy
I like both of your designs. They have a very organized and clean feel about them, which is important for a pediatric website. The concept of one long scrolling website is really cool, and it would probably work well for this assignment, but I think for a healthcare website, having individual pages ...
- Fri Oct 17, 2014 8:55 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3503
Re: Project 2 - roughs
You did an amazing job on these! Everything about them is so neat, and visually interesting, as my eyes can't stop moving around the page. One aspect I really enjoy, is how strategically placed all your text is. Even though there is a lot of text, it doesn't overwhelm the viewer because of how you s...
- Fri Oct 17, 2014 8:38 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3928
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
(You should post a link to the original website, just so all of us can compare, and see how much you improved it!) You did a great job putting this together. I definitely get a 'movie theater' vibe from the finished product. Also, the fact that the website didn't have movie posters/trailers/etc is c...
- Fri Oct 17, 2014 8:24 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project #2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3530
Re: project #2
Awesome job on these! I especially like how you created a logo to go with your whole design, that really bumps up the credibility of the website in my eyes. In addition, you chose the color blue, not because it's your favorite color, but because it has significance to the business, which makes your ...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 9:53 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 19
- Views: 4141
Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Hi, all. My name is Ashley, and this is the preliminary for project 2. For this assignment we needed to find a poorly put together website, and use our magic to make it better. For my website redesign I chose this one .. http://www.joesplacepizzaandpasta.com/ I knew immediately that I wanted to do a...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 7:18 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Lingling's roughs for project 2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3865
Re: Lingling's roughs for project 2
These are great! I like how you went with the clean and simple approach for your designs. Both have nice composition, and are really pleasing to look at because of their symmetry. My favorite is your second rough, I like the subdued blues, especially for a website promoting education, as it has a ve...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 7:01 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3384
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
How fun! These are good. I think you did a great job reorganizing the site to make it more navigable. I especially like all the little details you included to keep your redesigns similar to the original website. If I had to choose, I'd honestly go with the first layout you posted, primarily because ...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 6:45 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2_Preliminary comps
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3331
Re: Project 2_Preliminary comps
Wow. This feels and looks like something already available online. I immediately want to look through all the pages and browse through the merchandise. Can't think of much else to add, both of these are superb! I'm jealous. The first design is my favorite, it has this dark, ritzy vibe, and looks lik...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 6:25 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Roughs
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3818
Re: Project 2 Roughs
That's a pretty bad website you chose to redesign, but there's a lot of room to get creative. I'll start off first by saying I thought your roughs were for an independent business that crafts beer, I didn't really get a 'restaurant' vibe from your designs. I know they specialize in beer, so maybe it...