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by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 6:06 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3646

Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique

I think both your designs have a lot of potential. I'm not sure if the company had a logo or not, but placing a logo on your designs really bumped up the credibility, especially when it's completed, good idea! I'm leaning towards the second layout, because it looks less busy and more organized, comp...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:55 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Projecr 2 Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3245

Re: Projecr 2 Roughs

I really like the simplicity of both your designs. I think for a website that specializes in food, it should have food as the central focus, sometimes less is more, and you did that very well! I'm having a hard time picking one, because they're both awesome, but I think the second layout is more fit...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:47 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
Replies: 17
Views: 3851

Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique

Wow, these are so cool! Having an animal print as the background was a good idea, it makes the overall website feel exotic and exciting. Honestly, I just love your emphasis on snakes in general, belly dancing is certainly a comparable activity. Although I think both of these would work nicely for th...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:21 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3670

Re: Project 2 Prelim

Aw poop, now I really want a cupcake! Both of these roughs look good to me! I can already picture them with some soft, creamy colors, paired with a nice decorative typeface. I'm also a big fan of the banner-type navigation bar, it really suits the whole feel of the design, rounded edges and all. Sla...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 4:21 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Rough Ideas....
Replies: 15
Views: 3395

Re: Project Two Rough Ideas....

It's amazing you were able to create a website based off of that one. I wouldn't even know where to begin, but great job! You kept the colors subtle, yet made the overall design much more interesting and cleaner. I think these are both really good, but I'd definitely have to go with your first desig...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 4:13 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two_Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3506

Re: Project Two_Roughs

Nice job on these! I like that you simplified them significantly from the website they're based on. I think both have a lot of potential to work off of, but I also feel like they have some empty spaces that make the rest of the content look like it's floating. Maybe try pushing some of the elements ...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 4:05 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project #2_Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3171

Re: Project #2_Roughs

Oh man, that was a sad website you chose to redesign, but I love your direction with the two roughs! Your color choices were spot on, nice soft, pastel colors really correlate back to children. Both designs are very neat and organized, which I think is important when trying to convince parents to en...
by aslychsm
Thu Oct 16, 2014 3:41 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3447

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs

Those are both really good designs! I'm pretty sure I'd recognize that they were for a zoo, even if the title wasn't there. I think that either of these would be successful for this project, but I'm more fond of the first design. The silhouettes were a great idea, there's a lot for the eyes to wande...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:53 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 18
Views: 4098

Re: Project 1 Final

Awesome job improving from your roughs! Immediately after seeing your layout I get that you possess a love of old films, and that's great, combined with your description, user's will quickly be able to relate with you, which is important. As far as critiques go, I think this is a wonderful first pro...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:34 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: final_project1_Amy_red
Replies: 19
Views: 4323

Re: final_project1_Amy_red

Wow! I'm really in awe. I think your designs are captivating and incredibly unique. I like when you can see how much effort was put into something, and yours clearly shows where your passions are. The color combination is great, as are all of the different, contrasting elements that make the overall...