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- Thu Oct 16, 2014 6:06 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3646
Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique
I think both your designs have a lot of potential. I'm not sure if the company had a logo or not, but placing a logo on your designs really bumped up the credibility, especially when it's completed, good idea! I'm leaning towards the second layout, because it looks less busy and more organized, comp...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:55 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Projecr 2 Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3245
Re: Projecr 2 Roughs
I really like the simplicity of both your designs. I think for a website that specializes in food, it should have food as the central focus, sometimes less is more, and you did that very well! I'm having a hard time picking one, because they're both awesome, but I think the second layout is more fit...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:47 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3851
Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique
Wow, these are so cool! Having an animal print as the background was a good idea, it makes the overall website feel exotic and exciting. Honestly, I just love your emphasis on snakes in general, belly dancing is certainly a comparable activity. Although I think both of these would work nicely for th...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:21 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3670
Re: Project 2 Prelim
Aw poop, now I really want a cupcake! Both of these roughs look good to me! I can already picture them with some soft, creamy colors, paired with a nice decorative typeface. I'm also a big fan of the banner-type navigation bar, it really suits the whole feel of the design, rounded edges and all. Sla...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 4:21 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two Rough Ideas....
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3395
Re: Project Two Rough Ideas....
It's amazing you were able to create a website based off of that one. I wouldn't even know where to begin, but great job! You kept the colors subtle, yet made the overall design much more interesting and cleaner. I think these are both really good, but I'd definitely have to go with your first desig...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 4:13 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two_Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3506
Re: Project Two_Roughs
Nice job on these! I like that you simplified them significantly from the website they're based on. I think both have a lot of potential to work off of, but I also feel like they have some empty spaces that make the rest of the content look like it's floating. Maybe try pushing some of the elements ...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 4:05 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project #2_Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3171
Re: Project #2_Roughs
Oh man, that was a sad website you chose to redesign, but I love your direction with the two roughs! Your color choices were spot on, nice soft, pastel colors really correlate back to children. Both designs are very neat and organized, which I think is important when trying to convince parents to en...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 3:41 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3447
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
Those are both really good designs! I'm pretty sure I'd recognize that they were for a zoo, even if the title wasn't there. I think that either of these would be successful for this project, but I'm more fond of the first design. The silhouettes were a great idea, there's a lot for the eyes to wande...
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:53 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final
- Replies: 18
- Views: 4098
Re: Project 1 Final
Awesome job improving from your roughs! Immediately after seeing your layout I get that you possess a love of old films, and that's great, combined with your description, user's will quickly be able to relate with you, which is important. As far as critiques go, I think this is a wonderful first pro...
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:34 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: final_project1_Amy_red
- Replies: 19
- Views: 4323
Re: final_project1_Amy_red
Wow! I'm really in awe. I think your designs are captivating and incredibly unique. I like when you can see how much effort was put into something, and yours clearly shows where your passions are. The color combination is great, as are all of the different, contrasting elements that make the overall...