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by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Critique
Replies: 16
Views: 3520

Re: Project 1 Final Critique

Firstly, I really like that your background was physically drawn by you, that takes a lot of skill to do and make successful. In addition to that, it's an awesome illustration! I'm sort of torn between whether I really like how you made it black/white/gray, or if it would have been better with some ...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final_Project_#1
Replies: 15
Views: 3447

Re: Final_Project_#1

What a great website design! As far as being easy to navigate, you've certainly succeeded! I love how nicely everything is displayed. In addition, I feel like you really utilized all the space, as every detail in the layout is important and can be easily seen/read. The image in the background is bea...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:00 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 17
Views: 3972

Re: Project 1 Final

That photograph is fantastic, and I feel like you laid all the elements out nicely. I like that you implemented a white border, with the buttons just slightly overlapping, it gives the overall layout a cool layering effect. Your dynamic graphic in the center definitely speaks the loudest, as it was ...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One - Final Output
Replies: 18
Views: 3752

Re: Project One - Final Output

This is simplicity done right. I love that you used symbols instead of words, it keeps the overall appearance clean and concise. Your combination of black, white, and accents of blue work wonderfully. I don't know if you chose blue because it's your favorite color, or because of what it represents (...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one final
Replies: 17
Views: 3808

Re: Project one final

How peaceful this is to look at. You picked a great photo to use as your background, and everything is nicely spaced around the layout, very organized and tidy. The footer is bothering me a bit, as the spacing between 'Fall 2014' and the TMCC logo is much larger than the space between 'GRC 175 Desig...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final product
Replies: 19
Views: 3836

Re: Project 1 Final product

This is a really neat layout because it represents you! I love the hand drawn illustrations, as well as the background texture. It's a wonderful idea. To me though, the whole design is coming off a bit cluttered/busy, and I believe this is due to your choice of font (although it is a fun and dramati...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:32 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 21
Views: 4683

Re: Project 1 Final

This is a wonderful design! The bamboo photo is very whimsical, as are the colors, and I feel like there's something bright and magical hidden behind them. I don't know why, it just immediately makes me think of something fantasy related. I love that. Your name and logo on the right is awesome! They...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 11:54 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one Final
Replies: 20
Views: 4573

Re: Project one Final

Very cute layout! I like the detail you put into the flower, and that in your photo you're wearing a floral top, it shows some of your personality. Also, I think the circular accents are lovely. Aside from the suggestions already made, I definitely think you could add in more colors to further separ...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 11:32 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Project One. Homepage
Replies: 22
Views: 4782

Re: Final Project One. Homepage

These are so great! What you did with the images as buttons is awesome, and I absolutely love your color choices, they compliment the main photo so well. Additionally, the quote, in junction with your 'about me' description, give the whole design the impression that it was written by an avid adventu...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:58 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 19
Views: 4252

Re: Project One Final

This is so cute! Especially your little logo, to me that's the star of the whole layout! I really like how you applied the sketchbook idea, and made all the details seem hand drawn. I know you're going for a very simple and minimalist approach, and it works very well, but it just seems a little plai...