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by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:46 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: my final for Project one
Replies: 23
Views: 4913

Re: my final for Project one

Awesome design! I love the grainy photo as the background. Honestly, it reminds me of something that could be on the cover of a book, or movie poster, or record sleeve. It definitely has a sort of intense vibe, but the pink glasses help keep it lighthearted. Confining the main text to the lens was c...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:35 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final Critique
Replies: 17
Views: 3928

Re: Project 1 - Final Critique

This is so good! I love the complimentary colors, and how simple it is. I've seen a lot of minimalist type websites, but not all of them are successful, yours is definitely in the successful category! That subtle gradient in the background works well to give it depth, in addition to the shadows of y...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final Design
Replies: 19
Views: 3973

Re: Project 1 - Final Design

This is super cool! I really like how you utilized that darker box and inner glow/shadow it gives everything nice depth and proportion. Plus, the color tints and photo blend so well together. Overall, it's a very strong design! Nice and neat, and easy to navigate. Great job! My only recommendation i...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:10 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one online final
Replies: 20
Views: 4490

Re: Project one online final

Cool idea! I like the bright colors, and simplistic approach. That swooshy design behind your name is fun to look at, it sort of drags your eye around the page. As most people already said, the drop shadow is distracting, I also feel like you could lower the main text body, so that it sits in the ce...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:00 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Lingling's final critique for project1
Replies: 17
Views: 3828

Re: Lingling's final critique for project1

Your layout is so neat! Very traditional looking, with great ties to your heritage, but in a modern way. I like how it represents you, and the colors work great together. That photo you included is very clever, and I feel like I know a little bit about you just from skimming your design. There are o...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 9:52 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 17
Views: 3742

Re: Project 1 Final

Wow! This is so beautiful, especially with the tribal accents. In addition, you paired that lovely, primarily blue photo with an orange background, which really unifies all the elements together. I also like the leading of your main body text, it makes it clean and easy to read. My suggestions are f...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 9:33 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Critique For Project One
Replies: 15
Views: 3663

Re: Final Critique For Project One

Georgia! This is great! The changes you've made have improved the overall design significantly. Again, your photography is stunning, and I'm so happy you chose to display them as the main content. My only recommendations are to give the buttons a different background color other than black, to help ...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 9:25 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: The Final Critique has arrived — Project #1
Replies: 16
Views: 3827

Re: The Final Critique has arrived — Project #1

I can't get over how beautiful that photo is! The focus is perfect, and I can't help but feel so calm and serene while looking at the overall layout. Another feature that I find super pleasant is your choice of fonts, they compliment each other so well! And as a whole, you're choices have led to a v...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 9:02 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: My Awesome Roughs Because They're Awesome
Replies: 8
Views: 2030

Re: My Awesome Roughs Because They're Awesome

These are so fun! I feel like they really represent your character, especially with the "steampunk" looking photo. The colors and textures, even though they appear to clash, really seem to work well together. My pick is definitely the second layout, the first layout is just a little too bu...
by aslychsm
Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:52 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 15
Views: 3454

Re: Project 1 Final

Oh man. I really like it! The colors, the textures, the simplicity. I'm definitely struggling with something to suggest or critique. I think placing the main layout above a black backdrop was a great idea, especially how you arranged the TMCC logo and contact me. The only thing - and I mean only thi...