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by aslychsm
Thu Sep 25, 2014 10:32 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 16
Views: 3911

Project One Final

Hi, everyone! This is Ashley with my final layout for project one. During the preliminary critique, it seemed unanimous that I should go with the first layout. At first I didn’t want to agree, as I actually spent a lot more time putting the second one together, but as I read through the feedback I s...
by aslychsm
Sun Sep 14, 2014 1:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Roughs for Project 1 Prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 3265

Re: Roughs for Project 1 Prelim

Hi Georgia! First, I believe these are both really good places to start off. The designs are basic, but also have a lot of potential as preliminary pieces. With that being said, I'm more fond of the top layout, mostly because the bottom one seems too centered and generic. I like the "collage&qu...
by aslychsm
Sun Sep 14, 2014 1:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Here come the Roughs — Project #1
Replies: 12
Views: 2795

Re: Here come the Roughs — Project #1

Hi Cristina! These are really, really good! They both have a simple and clean feel. I also really like your color choices for both roughs, they suit their designs. I'm definitely leaning more towards the upper layout. It's just so neat and organized and easy to navigate! All the little accents and p...
by aslychsm
Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 3085

Re: Project 1 Roughs

Hello Patrick! Firstly, these are awesome! I immediately know something about you, even without reading the description, and that is that you are very inclined to films/filming. I appreciate when a design incorporates traces of personality, which yours certainly does. In addition, the roughs have th...
by aslychsm
Sun Sep 14, 2014 11:32 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1
Replies: 12
Views: 2637

Re: project 1

Hi, Elizabeth! These are both very wonderful, and I really appreciate how clean and organized they are. Your bicycle illustration in the top layout is great, I like how stylized it is, and the photo on the bottom layout is so calming. As far as my preference goes, I think you should go with the top ...
by aslychsm
Thu Sep 11, 2014 4:36 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Rough Layouts
Replies: 13
Views: 2968

Project One Rough Layouts

Hello, everyone. My name is Ashley Chisam, and this is the preliminary critique for project one. If my two layouts haven't made it clear, I really enjoy natural looking designs, particularly those that incorporate photos of the environment. For my own inspirations, I added geometric shapes to sort o...
by aslychsm
Fri Aug 29, 2014 12:17 pm
Forum: Introductions
Topic: Hello !
Replies: 2
Views: 1141

Hello !

Hi! (: My name is Ashley. I'll break the ice with some tidbits about myself.. I tried cat food once, not a fan When I was little I use to draw these weird creatures and then run around pretending to be them I attribute my love of video games to Drakan: Order of the Flame, it was the first game I eve...