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- Fri Dec 12, 2014 7:56 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 - Final Critique
- Replies: 3
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Project 3 - Final Critique
Hey everyone! It's finally done! I hope you enjoy it, it was fun (and of course time consuming) to create, and it's definitely very gratifying to see it posted and active and working. This was a really fun class, and it really helped me refine my coding techniques, and made for some fun experimentat...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 4:19 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project #3_Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3446
Re: Project #3_Preliminary Critique
Hi Danielle, I like the colored roughs much more than the grey ones. The grey colors just do not convey a very creative atmosphere. The content of your second roughs is nicely placed, but I think on the degrees page the first column of text needs more space between the right side of it and the left ...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 4:09 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: preliminary critique of project 3
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3350
Re: preliminary critique of project 3
Hi Ashley, These are great! I think the boldness of the second design speaks more to the Graphic Communications element, although that orange is very, very, bright. I don't see a problem with the image retaining its full color, which actually might need a bit less saturation in the greens. What you ...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:59 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project 3 preliminary critique
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3585
Re: project 3 preliminary critique
Hi Dominique, I think I like the second roughs more than the first. The idea that the paintbrush is what created the image of the Red Mountain Building is very interesting, but I think i could be pushed further by eliminating whatever's to the left of the paintbrush, changing the background to white...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:46 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project3
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3567
Re: Project3
Hi Kiwako, I really, really like the home page design with the large image, and its accompanying inner page. To improve those, I would consider using the horizontal version of the TMCC logo, or giving the current iteration some sort of background so it doesn't look like it's tacked on as an aftertho...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:38 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3781
Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs
Hi Elizabeth, My vote goes towards your first designs; with the column in the middle surrounded by images of the campus. That's a cool idea. I think the column is a little too small to fit enough content into especially if you have any long blocks of text, which would mean lots of scrolling. As a co...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:31 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Roughs
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1981
Re: Project 3 Roughs
Hi Pat, I think you should combine the two. I really like the look of the white TMCC logo on the dark background, but I like the overall cleaner layout of the first rough. If you're planning on creating a modern design, I would remove all traces of gradient and beveling from the page itself, as they...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:23 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: pr3_roughs_ab
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1480
Re: pr3_roughs_ab
Second design for sure; I don't think that's a very website-friendly green. I like the idea behind the second design, particularly the slogan that you've created, but I'm not really understanding the meaning behind it. I don't think the contact information is important enough to warrant its placemen...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:14 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Roughs
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3681
Re: Project 3 Roughs
Hey Justine, I think the first roughs are better, mostly because they have more visual structure to them than the black layout, which does look like Cards Against Humanity, now that you've mentioned it. I think your GRC logo could use a little refinement; I don't think it looks quite like a palette ...
- Thu Dec 04, 2014 2:58 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Lingling's project3 roughs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3216
Re: Lingling's project3 roughs
Hi Lingling, My preference is to your second set of roughs, with the green bar at the top. Your color scheme for the design is very nice, and your spaces for text are looking good. One thing you might try is moving the GRC News down a bit, so the text aligns with the second 'Overvew' text, because a...