GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

I love your new home page! It is so you! I like the simplicity of it and also the hand drawn feel of it. Your logo and signature are the perfect match to the page. Great job!

Hi guys, so I completely changed my website, but I feel like this represents me much more than the other two that I presented in preliminary critique. The Photo in the background is a photo of me that I took with a 35mm camera with black and white film. I had a really fun time with this project. the...

Hey Seth,

I love both of your designs! But I am leaning toward the first one. I love the simplicity of it and the use of negative space. the silhouette is awesome. The only thing missing is all the class info.

Hey Shalie,

I like the geometric image of the second rough. my thoughts are to try making that image either like a water mark, so turn down the opacity of it a lot. Or make it part of your logo. I feel like this one represents you more than the first one. great start!

I like the second rough more than the first because it feels more like a unified design. It feels a little left side dominant to me, I think because your header and your body copy both are on the left and stop at about the same place. maybe try moving your body copy around, or try centering it on th...

Hi Paula,

These are both great roughs and I think they both represent you. If you were to go with the second one could you try putting your logo into it either above or below your name. For the body copy try a clean san serif to compliment the soft headline type. Great job representing you!

Hi,
I like the first rough more than the second rough. Great idea putting the projsct bottons onthe filmstrip. Try butting the nav bar in line with your name. right now to me it feels like they are floating in that space.
Great roughs though!

Hi Matt,

wow, awesome roughs! I am leaning more toward the second one because I agree with Paula that the first one looks like a lawyer's site. I like the imagery of the second site.

hi Wendy,
I love the huge buttons of the second rough. It will be very easy to navigate this site. I like the purple color of the first rough. I would put your name on your site so people know its your site.

Hi Lingling,
These are so creative and fun! I love them both. I like the stylization of the first rough. The only thing is that the "create my vision" gets lost in the background. try playing with different colors or shades. great work!