Hi Dalanie,
I like your color choices in both your layouts. they are very complementary of each other and of the theme of your site. instead of having the GRC 175 all squished up in a box, try spreading it out on one line along with fall 2014.
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- Wed Sep 17, 2014 10:37 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Roughs for Project 1
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2814
- Tue Sep 16, 2014 7:52 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: amy_2roughs_again_blue_and_red_together
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1912
Re: amy_2roughs_again_blue_and_red_together
Hi Amy,
I like your red rough more because it is you and shows off your amazing talent as an artist. I agree that the buttons would be less aggravating to the eye if they were a warm yellow, or if you really wanted them to be red maybe a much lighter tint of the same color.
I like your red rough more because it is you and shows off your amazing talent as an artist. I agree that the buttons would be less aggravating to the eye if they were a warm yellow, or if you really wanted them to be red maybe a much lighter tint of the same color.
- Tue Sep 16, 2014 7:40 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Rough Layouts
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2962
Re: Project One Rough Layouts
Hi Ashley, I love both of your layouts! They are so natural and clean and the layouts have a very nice flow to them. I like the imagery in both layouts as well. For the first one (and I know this is kind of nit picking) the alignment on your name isn't centered in the box its sitting on. Either one ...
- Tue Sep 16, 2014 7:14 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2316
Re: Project 1
Hi Tiffani, I like both of your designs. They are both very clean. for the first one I like the background photo and your logo. The only thing I can see that I would play with is the contact button. It looks out of place sitting up at the top all by itself. For the second one I love the lay out and ...
- Mon Sep 15, 2014 11:47 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary_Critique_Project_1
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2589
Re: Preliminary_Critique_Project_1
Hi Alexa,
I like the first one for sure. It is much more your personality. I like the use of the petals for buttons
I would put the whole daisy on the page and not cut it off. I can't wait to see the finished product.
I like the first one for sure. It is much more your personality. I like the use of the petals for buttons
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- Mon Sep 15, 2014 11:38 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Roughs for Project 1 Prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3261
Re: Roughs for Project 1 Prelim
Hi Georgia, I think the second one is working better as far as the layout goes. The first is too busy and cluttered. for the second one I would try a lighter tint of that blue for the type, for the body copy at least. It is hard to read on the black background. Also try making the buttons a little b...
- Mon Sep 15, 2014 11:26 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Here come the Roughs — Project #1
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2791
Re: Here come the Roughs — Project #1
hi Cristina, I love both of your designs. The first one would be great if you were going to try to make it responsive. It is very clean and organized and I like your color scheme. I feel like the second one is more warm and personal. For this one the white highlight going through the page is a littl...
- Sun Sep 14, 2014 8:36 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2595
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Hi Dominique, In the first design I like where you placed the navigation bar, although I wouldn't put the white stroke at the bottom of it. The body copy type is hard for me to read so try playing around with type choices. For the second design I like your use of color and the drawing. Awesome job o...
- Sun Sep 14, 2014 8:23 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project #1 Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2658
Re: Project #1 Roughs
hi Danielle, I am actually liking your first layout better. I like the type choices you used. They are very complimentary of each other. I also like your color choices this site looks very happy :D One thing you might want to change is the white navigation bar. I would try making it either the yello...
- Sun Sep 14, 2014 7:51 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique For Days
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2752
Re: Preliminary Critique For Days
hi,
I like the asymmetric feel of the first design, it still feels balanced. Also on the first one, the about me button is really hard to read. Try playing with different fonts and weights of those fonts. I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns
out.
I like the asymmetric feel of the first design, it still feels balanced. Also on the first one, the about me button is really hard to read. Try playing with different fonts and weights of those fonts. I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns
out.