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- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:33 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
- Replies: 16
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Re: Project 2 Preliminary
I like the second page of the second layout. The bike and pizza are both important to them, so they should both be on the site. I do think you should have actual pictures of pizza though. That would compliment the bike sketches.
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:30 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary - Tucker M
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3021
Re: Project 2 Preliminary - Tucker M
What was Bobos thinking? Your <<one>> design is an improvement, but I don't have a choice now do I? It's that or patzilla?
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:25 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2747
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
I like the colors and layout of the first oneone, but the second one has the better picture... You should put them together!
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:22 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Crit
- Replies: 19
- Views: 4019
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Crit
I don't really have a preference, I would like to see the buildings they restore have greater pride of place. Show them off! The colors in the second design work better than the 1st, which feel really random.
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:18 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3419
Re: Project 2 Prelim
The 2nd choice has a definite Christian feel to it. I agree with Avery that the crosses behind the words are not well placed, but I would move them rather than removing them as they are key to that faith. I would try adding some texture to the brown background to give it some depth.
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:12 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project two rough
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2911
Re: project two rough
I like the rustic flag and the food pictures in the first design. It does feel a little busy though, you should try to simplify.
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:07 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3127
Re: Project 2 Prelim Critique
I like the dark background of the first design, but you need to work on the contrast. Also, even though there is a photo gallery, I think there should be pictures showcasing their work at least on the home page. One of their best pieces to highlight their skills.
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:02 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2- Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3252
Re: Project 2- Prelim
I'm going to go against everyone here because I like the Starburst. It really draws you in to the logo, and I would love to see big pictures of the food next to it. I would really push the food pix, because I would assume anyone visiting the site is hungry or soon will be. Make the menu king!
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 7:56 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: preliminary_proj2_kk
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2860
Re: preliminary_proj2_kk
I like the bios on the first one, but the colors and feel of the second one feels more modern and professional. If you go with bios, they need to be edited. The example feels more like a CV or resume than a bio.
- Mon Oct 19, 2015 7:49 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 2
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3532
Re: Preliminary Critique Project 2
I like the first one, and I'm wondering why you didn't choose a Lodge picture for the second page of the second design? Other than tweaking the font sizes it looks good.