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by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:33 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 16
Views: 3232

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

I like the second page of the second layout. The bike and pizza are both important to them, so they should both be on the site. I do think you should have actual pictures of pizza though. That would compliment the bike sketches.
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:30 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary - Tucker M
Replies: 14
Views: 3021

Re: Project 2 Preliminary - Tucker M

What was Bobos thinking? Your <<one>> design is an improvement, but I don't have a choice now do I? It's that or patzilla?
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:25 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
Replies: 13
Views: 2747

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2

I like the colors and layout of the first oneone, but the second one has the better picture... You should put them together!
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:22 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Crit
Replies: 19
Views: 4019

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Crit

I don't really have a preference, I would like to see the buildings they restore have greater pride of place. Show them off! The colors in the second design work better than the 1st, which feel really random.
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 3419

Re: Project 2 Prelim

The 2nd choice has a definite Christian feel to it. I agree with Avery that the crosses behind the words are not well placed, but I would move them rather than removing them as they are key to that faith. I would try adding some texture to the brown background to give it some depth.
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:12 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project two rough
Replies: 13
Views: 2911

Re: project two rough

I like the rustic flag and the food pictures in the first design. It does feel a little busy though, you should try to simplify.
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:07 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Prelim Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3127

Re: Project 2 Prelim Critique

I like the dark background of the first design, but you need to work on the contrast. Also, even though there is a photo gallery, I think there should be pictures showcasing their work at least on the home page. One of their best pieces to highlight their skills.
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 8:02 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2- Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 3252

Re: Project 2- Prelim

I'm going to go against everyone here because I like the Starburst. It really draws you in to the logo, and I would love to see big pictures of the food next to it. I would really push the food pix, because I would assume anyone visiting the site is hungry or soon will be. Make the menu king!
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 7:56 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary_proj2_kk
Replies: 13
Views: 2860

Re: preliminary_proj2_kk

I like the bios on the first one, but the colors and feel of the second one feels more modern and professional. If you go with bios, they need to be edited. The example feels more like a CV or resume than a bio.
by punkassbookjockey
Mon Oct 19, 2015 7:49 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 2
Replies: 16
Views: 3532

Re: Preliminary Critique Project 2

I like the first one, and I'm wondering why you didn't choose a Lodge picture for the second page of the second design? Other than tweaking the font sizes it looks good.