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- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:26 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3421
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
I like the layout of the first one. I think the pink needs to be adjusted. Not changed to a different color, just tweaked.
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:24 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Hi GRC 175. Here are my two roughs for my 175 website
- Replies: 20
- Views: 4488
Re: Hi GRC 175. Here are my two roughs for my 175 website
The use of the "road" in both is very clever, but the first one really grabs my attention. I love the reflexion in the goggles. I'd like to see some of the color from there used on the rest of the page.
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:21 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: What I got so far
- Replies: 22
- Views: 4645
Re: What I got so far
I like how the second choice highlights your art, but you could use either one. Both are very well done.
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:19 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Roughs
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3699
Re: Project 1 - Roughs
I like the second one of the two, but would like to see more color. Why did you re-arrange the letters of your name?
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:16 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project_one_roughs
- Replies: 21
- Views: 4156
Re: project_one_roughs
While the colors in the first one are pretty, I prefer the black and white. On the logo, try refining the text. "graphic" and "artist" would look better if they were more uniform.
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:11 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4838
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
I like the one with the cat, but I'm not sure what either says about you. Probably don't want "nerd rage" in a portfolio website...
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:06 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project_#1_roughs
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4480
Re: Project_#1_roughs
I love the colors and style of your first one. The second one doesn't stand out against it.
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:06 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project_#1_roughs
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4480
Re: Project_#1_roughs
I love the colors and style of your first one. The second one doesn't stand out against itit?
- Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:42 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Critique
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3497
Re: Project 1 Critique
I like the second one better because the extra color gives it more vibrance. Both are very similar though.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:21 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3595
Re: Project 1
While I like the girl in the first rough, I think the second is stronger over all. The carp could use a little refining, but its over all appearance is good.