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- Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:52 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 19
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary
You have two that I really like. however, I think the skier perched on the edge of the top one draws the eye in very effectively. If you brought in more of the yellow elsewhere, it would help draw attention.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:48 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3960
Re: Project 1 Prelim
I like both designs for the drawings and the colors you have chosen. I feel like the second one would make a better 2nd page, I think it would be fun to see the ice cream cone before it gets smooshed, then have it smooshed when it is clicked on.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 12:17 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 20
- Views: 4028
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
I really like the moon phases, the colors work well with the b/w photo. Some of the text is difficult to read, so you may want more contrast in those areas.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 12:12 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3820
Re: Project 1 Prelim
I think both have a lot of potential, I'm not sure which I like more. My question is: which one says more about who you are? I like the way the text is arranged on the first one. The second needs work in that area.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 10:14 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One, Preliminary
- Replies: 21
- Views: 4215
Re: Project One, Preliminary
I like the second one because the colors work well together. The contrast needs to be adjusted, but that is an easy fix. The first one would be improved by coordinating the colors with the pictures.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 10:09 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique #1
- Replies: 20
- Views: 4194
Re: Preliminary Critique #1
I love the b/w one; it is very classy and easy to navigate, and I love the pop of color. The colors on the second one do not work with the background image, which makes it look busier than it actually is.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 10:04 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary for project 1
- Replies: 21
- Views: 4088
Re: Preliminary for project 1
I like the b/w layout, and the film strip of photographs. The second one could still work, but you would need to make the words easier to read via contrast.
- Thu Sep 17, 2015 10:02 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 prelim rf
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3296
Re: Project 1 prelim rf
I prefer the middle picture, I like how the road draws you in. I agree with Avery, you need to work on contrast. Try muting the picture a bit.
- Tue Sep 15, 2015 4:41 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary project one
- Replies: 26
- Views: 4936
Re: Preliminary project one
That isn't actually in my design, and doesn't show up on my screen. Don't know where it came from?!
- Tue Sep 15, 2015 3:00 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary project one
- Replies: 26
- Views: 4936
Re: Preliminary project one
By gray bar, do you mean the text at the top of the page?