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by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:34 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 3040

Re: prelim

I like the top one for its layout and colors. I think you need to redo the "graphic communication program" header, it isn't working.
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:24 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim Critique
Replies: 14
Views: 3111

Re: Project 3 Prelim Critique

The first one is better because the pix one don't account for the negative space. The navigation on one need to be aligned and angled at the same degree for each work (20° and - 20° for example.) less green, please.
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:19 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 13
Views: 3063

Re: Project 3 Prelim

Hard to tell without images. The first one is my preference because I don't like the lizard either. (It's like the college version of barney.) I think the layout on the first is best, but the navigation bar needs something to make it stand out.
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:14 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3405

Re: Project 3 prelim

I like the first one too. Cool font for GRC. I don't know what else to say, there's not enough up to comment on.
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:09 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: pr3 prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 2558

Re: pr3 prelim

I like the backgrounds of both, but the second is my favorite. I don't like the brown boxes though. I'm not sure the melon head is something you want to use to highlight the work. Try a different picture.
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:07 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 3202

Re: Project 3 Prelim

I like the graphic on the second picture from the top. For overall design, you need to keep the picture the same and change the colors OR keep the color the same and change the design. That will make them feel like they are part of the same sight.
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:02 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
Replies: 14
Views: 3081

Re: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M

The first one is my favorite. I think you need to play around with the transparency of the images to make them pop. Really strong start.
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:58 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3473

Re: Project 3 Prelim

The second one looks like a different version of the first. I like the color in th e second, the gray is very easy on the eye. I would love to see you do the logo in torn paper...
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:50 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: roughs for project 3
Replies: 16
Views: 3221

Re: roughs for project 3

I like the concept of the top one, but I think you need to work on the picture so you have more space and less distortion. Also, it needs some element to remind you that you are still on the TMCC website. Or a navigation that takes you back to the site. I love Tucker's idea of using an Adobe app, bu...
by punkassbookjockey
Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:43 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
Replies: 16
Views: 3354

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3

The top one is very engaging, and showcases the college very well. I love the picture in the background! I would make the content box more transparent so that the picture can be seen.