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- Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:34 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3278
Re: prelim
I like the top one for its layout and colors. I think you need to redo the "graphic communication program" header, it isn't working.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:24 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3402
Re: Project 3 Prelim Critique
The first one is better because the pix one don't account for the negative space. The navigation on one need to be aligned and angled at the same degree for each work (20° and - 20° for example.) less green, please.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:19 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3299
Re: Project 3 Prelim
Hard to tell without images. The first one is my preference because I don't like the lizard either. (It's like the college version of barney.) I think the layout on the first is best, but the navigation bar needs something to make it stand out.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:14 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3631
Re: Project 3 prelim
I like the first one too. Cool font for GRC. I don't know what else to say, there's not enough up to comment on.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:09 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: pr3 prelim
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2755
Re: pr3 prelim
I like the backgrounds of both, but the second is my favorite. I don't like the brown boxes though. I'm not sure the melon head is something you want to use to highlight the work. Try a different picture.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:07 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3510
Re: Project 3 Prelim
I like the graphic on the second picture from the top. For overall design, you need to keep the picture the same and change the colors OR keep the color the same and change the design. That will make them feel like they are part of the same sight.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:02 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3289
Re: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
The first one is my favorite. I think you need to play around with the transparency of the images to make them pop. Really strong start.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:58 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3736
Re: Project 3 Prelim
The second one looks like a different version of the first. I like the color in th e second, the gray is very easy on the eye. I would love to see you do the logo in torn paper...
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:50 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: roughs for project 3
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3551
Re: roughs for project 3
I like the concept of the top one, but I think you need to work on the picture so you have more space and less distortion. Also, it needs some element to remind you that you are still on the TMCC website. Or a navigation that takes you back to the site. I love Tucker's idea of using an Adobe app, bu...
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:43 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3670
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
The top one is very engaging, and showcases the college very well. I love the picture in the background! I would make the content box more transparent so that the picture can be seen.