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by daveryjones
Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:01 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: roughs for project 3
Replies: 16
Views: 3551

Re: roughs for project 3

I like the top one better but I think the perspective will be a difficult task when coding your site. You're great though so go for it!
by daveryjones
Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:00 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 13
Views: 3302

Re: Project 3 Prelim

These look similar to each other and to what already exists so maybe try incorporating dynamic images or something to create visual interest. I think the top one works better though.
by daveryjones
Mon Nov 23, 2015 3:56 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
Replies: 14
Views: 3289

Re: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M

I like the first one because it is more dynamic. Why not use TMCC's color somehow? Maybe as an accent color or something. Good start!
by daveryjones
Mon Nov 23, 2015 3:55 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: pr3 prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 2755

Re: pr3 prelim

I definitely like the top design better. Take away the white boxes though. Keep up the good work and keep thinking outside of the box.
by daveryjones
Thu Nov 19, 2015 4:00 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 3278

Re: prelim

Rough designs but I get what you are going for. If I chose one, I would pick the top one. Switch the bottom right box to the left and shift your center picture to correspond. (If that makes sense) Make sure you are not leaving too much empty space. Good start though.
by daveryjones
Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:57 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: prelim_#3
Replies: 15
Views: 3519

Re: prelim_#3

I think you have a good idea but I don't have anything to compare it to. One suggestion is that I would not center align your body copy. Maybe justify with the last line aligned left. Good start, my friend.
by daveryjones
Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:52 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3650

Re: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique

I really enjoy your bottom design. It is visually appealing and has great contrast. I love the movement within the design. Is there a reason you made the stuff on the left not all align at the same point on the right? Like where the headline is closer to your white box than the other type.. You alwa...
by daveryjones
Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:45 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
Replies: 16
Views: 3670

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3

I LOVE your top design. Not only is it clean and simple, it is visually appealing, easy to navigate, and still interesting. I find it to be professional and classic. I love the colors, type, and imagery.
by daveryjones
Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:42 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3631

Re: Project 3 prelim

I would definitely go with the black choice because the other one is having some severe contrast issues. I don't understand what is going where though. What is the big green thing above GRC and will there be information in it? Also, will your links be labeled or not?
by daveryjones
Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:34 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3736

Re: Project 3 Prelim

I really like the torn paper design as well! It is clean and to the point but still visually appealing and interesting. Good concept. I also agree with the above comment that maybe you could incorporate the sierras :)