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by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 10:10 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: [Late] Project1 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2636

Re: [Late] Project1 Final

Very cool layout, lots of energy in the design with the colors and fonts. Maybe a little work on the contrast of your type for legibility would help. Nice work though.
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 10:08 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one for sara kennedy
Replies: 11
Views: 2443

Re: project one for sara kennedy

I really like your layout. I think that the black and white make your whole page look very dramatic in a good way. I think a little bit more alignment on the footer may help. It is a very good photo of you and how the background goes from light to dark is visually interesting. Nice work! :)
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 10:03 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Critique for Project#1
Replies: 13
Views: 2783

Re: Final Critique for Project#1

I love your layout it is so unique. I think that you may not need those rectangles on the sides, or maybe just lower the chroma or something. This site is something that will really catch peoples eye, nice work!
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:58 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Tucker M - Final
Replies: 15
Views: 4004

Re: Tucker M - Final

I like your layout a lot. The endless scroll/endless depth of the ocean is a very awesome theme. I think once you add what you were saying to the title page, to make it more of a title page its going to be sweet. Will be a fun website to look at finished for sure.
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:54 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: For Your Review - Project 1 Final Submission
Replies: 12
Views: 2760

Re: For Your Review - Project 1 Final Submission

Your page looks good, can tell you did a lot of work since the last critique. Color scheme is working well for it. I would take your projects out from next to the TMCC logo and put a Projects button in your navigation just to clean up the page a little. Should be a very neat website when its built t...
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:51 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 12
Views: 2431

Re: Project One Final

I think it is very cool as a layout. I think that the rollover buttons add a good level of interest as well to keep you looking at the page. I think that the home button is a little out of place with the rest of the layout. I really like how it turned out though!
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:48 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: project1_final_kk
Replies: 10
Views: 2343

Re: project1_final_kk

I think that it is very interesting to look at. Has a very fun feel to it. I would just put your home type in the center of the circle like the others for uniformity. I think it turned out very good though nice work!
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:46 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Projetc #1 - Final Critique
Replies: 13
Views: 3036

Re: Projetc #1 - Final Critique

Looks super professional, really like how it turned out. I think that it will be a very cool website and has a good theme you could carry over to your other pages nice work.
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:42 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: [ Redo ] Project 1 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 2570

Re: [ Redo ] Project 1 Final

I like your layout a lot. Very good font and color scheme. I think that you really made good progress from the last critique don't have much to say on what I would change.
by sierra_style
Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:38 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2484

Re: Project 1 Final

Very cool how this came together. Has a nice feel to it and is interesting to look at for sure. I think if you took out the vine right above your name it would look a little cleaner and easier to read. Just personal preference though. Can't wait to see it as a real site.