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- Wed Oct 21, 2015 3:31 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3232
- Wed Oct 21, 2015 3:27 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary for Project Two
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2885
I much prefer the second one over the first. The Sandy blue one. It looks a less retro than the first one and the color scheme is nicer. The composition of how the layout was made is appealing and information looks easier to find. You did well to choose your fonts as they mesh well with the theme an...
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:08 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project two rough
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2911
I think the first design works a lot better than the second. I am a little perplexed with the empty space. It probably works, but to me it feels out of place, and the images being at the bottom could probably work better on top? Other than that, I like the two font choices, good on your for making t...
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:03 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary - Tucker M
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3025
It is a great design, and a strong one at that. I'm only sad there isn't more to show for it, or a second idea. With that said, the color is very well utilized and the neutral background works in your favor. The color choices are slick and modern, and correlates with what you're trying to advertise ...
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:58 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Crit
- Replies: 19
- Views: 4019
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:50 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3419
Re: Project 2 Prelim
The second one, hands down. First is too boxy. I would much prefer the colors of the first one for the second, and I think the gaps are uneven, so when you hash it out, to make them spaced more neatly. I enjoy the font selections otherwise, and the image is great.
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:48 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3127
While the two concepts are a tad similar in design, I find myself drawn to the second one more. Not only is it easier to read, but I like the clean-cut feel it has and the design makes it feel professional. My biggest recommendation would be to pick one main font and role with it. Its okay if the li...
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:37 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2- Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3252
The first is amazing, and it feels like a restaurant. The color choices (be it the restaurants or your own) is authentic. The sandwich image if very appetizing, I'm not sure if its in your control, but it looks pixelated, so if you could find a higher resolution that would be great. Also the header/...
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:34 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: preliminary_proj2_kk
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2860
Re: preliminary_proj2_kk
The first concept reads a more professional manner, and executes the theme much better than the second one. I enjoy the hover feature (I believe that's what it is) of the profiling. The colors are nice and very strong. Hard to say with the logo since it's currently a place holder, but if that's the ...
- Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:30 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 2
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3532
Re: Preliminary Critique Project 2
I much prefer the first concept, it has a very strong design and I like the imagery used to make it happen. The navigation looks spiffy and the secondary images are more neat than the second. Maybe fiddle with "The Marina" a little more. It feels a tad out of place.