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by Computer Lover
Wed Oct 21, 2015 3:31 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 16
Views: 3232

The tan and orange one looks a lot nicer than the black one, and I think the strong imagery for the first one may have something to do with that. The font choices are great and its easy to read everything. Maybe turning the scheme into something triad would make it even more interesting.
by Computer Lover
Wed Oct 21, 2015 3:27 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary for Project Two
Replies: 13
Views: 2885

I much prefer the second one over the first. The Sandy blue one. It looks a less retro than the first one and the color scheme is nicer. The composition of how the layout was made is appealing and information looks easier to find. You did well to choose your fonts as they mesh well with the theme an...
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:08 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project two rough
Replies: 13
Views: 2911

I think the first design works a lot better than the second. I am a little perplexed with the empty space. It probably works, but to me it feels out of place, and the images being at the bottom could probably work better on top? Other than that, I like the two font choices, good on your for making t...
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:03 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary - Tucker M
Replies: 14
Views: 3025

It is a great design, and a strong one at that. I'm only sad there isn't more to show for it, or a second idea. With that said, the color is very well utilized and the neutral background works in your favor. The color choices are slick and modern, and correlates with what you're trying to advertise ...
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:58 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Crit
Replies: 19
Views: 4019

The second concept looks a lot cooler and the brick background is a nice touch to the website. I'm not sure if I like the blue div, but I'm not sure how to improve it. I would maybe get rid of the black bars surround the links and just use "bricks" for buttons, perhaps. I enjoy the font ch...
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:50 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 3419

Re: Project 2 Prelim

The second one, hands down. First is too boxy. I would much prefer the colors of the first one for the second, and I think the gaps are uneven, so when you hash it out, to make them spaced more neatly. I enjoy the font selections otherwise, and the image is great.
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:48 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Prelim Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3127

While the two concepts are a tad similar in design, I find myself drawn to the second one more. Not only is it easier to read, but I like the clean-cut feel it has and the design makes it feel professional. My biggest recommendation would be to pick one main font and role with it. Its okay if the li...
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:37 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2- Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 3252

The first is amazing, and it feels like a restaurant. The color choices (be it the restaurants or your own) is authentic. The sandwich image if very appetizing, I'm not sure if its in your control, but it looks pixelated, so if you could find a higher resolution that would be great. Also the header/...
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:34 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary_proj2_kk
Replies: 13
Views: 2860

Re: preliminary_proj2_kk

The first concept reads a more professional manner, and executes the theme much better than the second one. I enjoy the hover feature (I believe that's what it is) of the profiling. The colors are nice and very strong. Hard to say with the logo since it's currently a place holder, but if that's the ...
by Computer Lover
Tue Oct 20, 2015 6:30 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 2
Replies: 16
Views: 3532

Re: Preliminary Critique Project 2

I much prefer the first concept, it has a very strong design and I like the imagery used to make it happen. The navigation looks spiffy and the secondary images are more neat than the second. Maybe fiddle with "The Marina" a little more. It feels a tad out of place.