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by Computer Lover
Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:31 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 23
Views: 4857

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

They're both interesting and both have elements that work for them. The first one has decent composition and a noticeable color scheme, but the second one has more imagery. Though the second is a tad more chaotic. Perhaps refining either of them to be more unified would help.
by Computer Lover
Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Hi GRC 175. Here are my two roughs for my 175 website
Replies: 20
Views: 4507

Re: Hi GRC 175. Here are my two roughs for my 175 website

I like the second one better, but I feel the first one is more personable. Maybe if you could combined the elements it could make for an awesome page!
by Computer Lover
Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:25 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One, Preliminary
Replies: 21
Views: 4232

Re: Project One, Preliminary

I do find both of them enjoyable, though I enjoy the green/orange concept more.

While the blue is nice, it appears a little judicial, like I'm on a law firm site, but it's still nice.
by Computer Lover
Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:23 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 20
Views: 4037

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

I really enjoy the green/leafy color scheme of the second option. It feels more youthful and vibrant.

The left align text is rather weird though. Since its such a small body, maybe center it instead?
by Computer Lover
Wed Sep 16, 2015 3:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project_#1_roughs
Replies: 23
Views: 4498

Re: Project_#1_roughs

I absolutely love the first rough. The colors look great together and the circular theme looks more organic. I enjoy how you use the size of the circles to guide importance/emphasis. I'm just not sure about the solid blue and yellow.
by Computer Lover
Wed Sep 16, 2015 3:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: What I got so far
Replies: 22
Views: 4675

Re: What I got so far

The second one looks a lot better than the first, and the images you selected for it add better flow to your composition. I think the black is a little strong for the soft green, so perhaps choosing a more relatable color would make it visually appealing.
by Computer Lover
Wed Sep 16, 2015 3:25 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Roughs
Replies: 18
Views: 3720

Re: Project 1 - Roughs

I prefer the composition of the first website more, as it looks like it flows better than the first one. The images are a nice touch.
But the website appears a little bare, and would benefit with more visionary elements like background colors for the body of text.
by Computer Lover
Wed Sep 16, 2015 3:23 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Projetc #1 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 21
Views: 4371

Re: Projetc #1 - Preliminary Critique

Hello! I'm very fond of the second design. I feel like the color pallet, it contrasts well and looks professional. The texture background also adds a nice touch.

I feel the text is a little difficult to read, however.
by Computer Lover
Mon Sep 14, 2015 3:37 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project_one_roughs
Replies: 21
Views: 4170

Re: project_one_roughs

I like the first one better, it has a nice visual appeal to it and the font is pleasing, but I recommend lowering the opacity a tad for continuity to the home/starter page.
by Computer Lover
Mon Sep 14, 2015 3:35 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#1
Replies: 23
Views: 4513

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#1

I think the first one looks amazing and has a lot of neat elements integrated into it. The colors work well together, and even though it appears busy, it's not considered overwhelming.