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- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:12 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project3 preliminary work
- Replies: 15
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Re: Project3 preliminary work
Both designs are so unique and well laid out, I cannot decide. As a clerical person, the file folders are close to my heart, but the random geometrics make my brain work out. Perhaps more color on the second one would make it even more interesting..?
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:07 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: pr3 prelim
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2620
Re: pr3 prelim
Although the melon head is creepy, it does give a great example of "what you can learn to do!" The first layouts are more agreeable to my old, cranky eyes and brain, but, as so many others said, without the white boxes.
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:03 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3482
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
I think the second layouts are more professional-looking and the use of images is more appropriate. They are very similar to the current pages, so that may be an issue, as far as the project's aim.
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:01 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3600
Re: Project 3 Prelim
Love the torn paper, who hasn't had to use a shredded piece for a note? Brilliant concept to make it into the Sierras, rather than the cityscape in the first one. I also really like the images, very representative. The right-aligned type adds to the interest, nice work.
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 10:57 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Preliminary Critique #3
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3094
Re: Preliminary Critique #3
Here's hoping you went with the first one! The clock image is a bit disconcerting, but leave it up to individual interpretation, as with both Tucker's and Robert's comments. Some TMCC green would indeed tie it in with the rest of the school's sites.
You are amazing, Avery.
You are amazing, Avery.
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 10:53 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: prelim_#3
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3350
Re: prelim_#3
I agree with Ashley, the second set is much more interesting. I hope it's what you went with...
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 10:47 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: your thoughts? prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3331
Re: your thoughts? prelim
The first set is definitely more interesting. It's also much more professional and a great use of the mascot! The text boxes might need a bit more color/less fade, they are awkward to read..?
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 10:43 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3520
Re: Project 3 prelim
The black one seems a bit more professional, balanced, and the color scheme is in line with other TMCC sites.
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 10:41 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3178
Re: Project 3 Prelim
(Better late than never?)
The first set, definitely the first set. The graphic is a MUCH better representation of graphics students' capability than the lizard. Although the layout is extremly close to the existing TMCC pages, perhaps that is a requisite..?
The first set, definitely the first set. The graphic is a MUCH better representation of graphics students' capability than the lizard. Although the layout is extremly close to the existing TMCC pages, perhaps that is a requisite..?
- Wed Oct 21, 2015 9:34 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3381
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
The first one, while it looks delicious, is difficult to read and the image is so big it evokes gluttony. The second ones are much more (ahem) tasteful. The wooden background does just what you wanted it to, sends everyone to their Grammy's kitchen. Nice!