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- Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:54 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
- Replies: 14
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Re: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
The first one certainly has the dynamics needed, but that color...very bright... As other said, perhaps some TMCC green to mute it?
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:50 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: roughs for project 3
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3551
Re: roughs for project 3
Love the Mac concept! It does need a bit of tweaking, hope you found time. Perhaps remove the cpu portion of the computer and use the space for the text everyone says is lacking..?
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:46 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3412
Re: Project 3 Prelim Critique
I hope you went with the second set. The color and zig/zag of the headlines make them distracting and awkward. The second one is balanced and professional, but as others stated, bit green. Perhaps some of Michael's gradient work..?
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:43 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3
- Replies: 1
- Views: 803
Re: Project 3
Great concept, in line with the course catalogs, well done!
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:29 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3278
Re: prelim
I hope you went with the first design and tweaked it to perfection (especially with Spellcheck!) It's bold, interesting and balanced, plus the colors are in line with TMCC.
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:26 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3650
Re: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
Definitely the second set. And definitely agree with Tucker on just a touch of overuse of the swiping. Perhaps just reducing the big white one a bit would help..? Brilliant work!
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:24 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: prelim Three
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3815
Re: prelim Three
I hope you went with the second one, it's amazing. The font color does need a bit of tweaking...
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:22 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3507
Re: Project 3 Preliminary
I hope you've softened the colors on the second set...that "Pantene Eye" or whatever is amazing and could be ispiring to a would-be graphics student!
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:18 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3510
Re: Project 3 Prelim
The header of Home A is so interesting, I would prefer to see it on all the pages. The colors all seem to coordinate, albeit using the ever-loving TMCC green, but it's nicely blended. Interesting!
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:15 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3246
Re: Project 3 Prelim
The second set works much better for me. It seems so much less cluttered, uses interesting images, and the slant to the boxes creates a subtle interest. Perhaps a bit on the green side, but that's a great introduction to TMCC!