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by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:54 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
Replies: 14
Views: 3289

Re: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M

The first one certainly has the dynamics needed, but that color...very bright... As other said, perhaps some TMCC green to mute it?
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:50 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: roughs for project 3
Replies: 16
Views: 3551

Re: roughs for project 3

Love the Mac concept! It does need a bit of tweaking, hope you found time. Perhaps remove the cpu portion of the computer and use the space for the text everyone says is lacking..?
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:46 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim Critique
Replies: 14
Views: 3412

Re: Project 3 Prelim Critique

I hope you went with the second set. The color and zig/zag of the headlines make them distracting and awkward. The second one is balanced and professional, but as others stated, bit green. Perhaps some of Michael's gradient work..?
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:43 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3
Replies: 1
Views: 803

Re: Project 3

Great concept, in line with the course catalogs, well done!
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:29 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 3278

Re: prelim

I hope you went with the first design and tweaked it to perfection (especially with Spellcheck!) It's bold, interesting and balanced, plus the colors are in line with TMCC.
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:26 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3650

Re: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique

Definitely the second set. And definitely agree with Tucker on just a touch of overuse of the swiping. Perhaps just reducing the big white one a bit would help..? Brilliant work!
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:24 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: prelim Three
Replies: 16
Views: 3815

Re: prelim Three

I hope you went with the second one, it's amazing. The font color does need a bit of tweaking...
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:22 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 3507

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

I hope you've softened the colors on the second set...that "Pantene Eye" or whatever is amazing and could be ispiring to a would-be graphics student!
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:18 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 3510

Re: Project 3 Prelim

The header of Home A is so interesting, I would prefer to see it on all the pages. The colors all seem to coordinate, albeit using the ever-loving TMCC green, but it's nicely blended. Interesting!
by moserary
Wed Dec 09, 2015 11:15 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 3246

Re: Project 3 Prelim

The second set works much better for me. It seems so much less cluttered, uses interesting images, and the slant to the boxes creates a subtle interest. Perhaps a bit on the green side, but that's a great introduction to TMCC!