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by lornrocks
Tue May 03, 2016 11:51 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Let's share our art works for this project!
Replies: 19
Views: 15478

Re: Let's share our art works for this project!

I put my name on a bunch of my works when I uploaded them online, is it cool if I just upload those ones here instead of going back into the PSD files and resaving them without the watermark? Also some of these are drawings and paintings I did not for the program, per se?? Idk. Just adding variety h...
by lornrocks
Tue May 03, 2016 4:35 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 2343

Re: Project 3 preliminary

I feel like a clean color background would suit your designs better than a photograph would. It looks too busy with the photograph behind it. Perhaps a minimalist texture would look good, as well. I like what you're going for but I think it needs more work. The way the photos of the staff circles th...
by lornrocks
Mon May 02, 2016 11:01 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Let's share our art works for this project!
Replies: 19
Views: 15478

Re: Let's share our art works for this project!

Do you want it to be just work we did for this class or work we've done in general? Because I have both I can post when I get home today.
by lornrocks
Sun May 01, 2016 10:00 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 2319

Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique

I like both of your designs, but I feel like they could be combined into one unique design, as there are benefits and cons to both. The first design has a bit of a look to it that's a lot like what we're currently redesigning, although I love the color scheme and the image header you've chosen. I ca...
by lornrocks
Fri Apr 29, 2016 4:43 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum
Replies: 12
Views: 4107

Re: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum

Wow, these are both fantastic! But you've been doing great work all semester, so I expect that, haha. I love both of these layouts, but I think the bottom design is too reminiscent of a ski resort, not the program. I think the first one is better suited to the assignment, but save the illustration f...
by lornrocks
Fri Apr 29, 2016 4:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim_Kami
Replies: 13
Views: 3661

Re: Project 3 Prelim_Kami

Hmm, I like both of your designs. Your top one is certainly very unique, no one else on the forum has done something like that. I like the black and white photos with the color pop and the subject matter. My only issue is that the photos look squished and it doesn't leave a lot of room for text. May...
by lornrocks
Fri Apr 29, 2016 4:27 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Skeletons
Replies: 13
Views: 3625

Re: Project 3 Skeletons

I like your top design with the peach colored boxes, but I feel like the photograph in the background is useless when the boxes are opaque and cover like 90% of it. Maybe add a little transparency to the boxes so the image can show through. Maybe make your text into columns or sections so it's not j...
by lornrocks
Thu Apr 28, 2016 4:51 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 3891

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

I think your second design is stronger than the first one. It's more timeless. I like the color schemes and tiny hints of rainbow (instead of full-on rainbow) and it seems to be much easier to read and navigate, especially for people with accessibility issues. I like the texture on the background of...
by lornrocks
Thu Apr 28, 2016 4:40 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project3 preliminary critique
Replies: 12
Views: 3370

Re: Project3 preliminary critique

I think both design possibilities are very strong. The first one is nice because it's very modern with the photographic header and the layout. The second one is very graphically strong and has a great color scheme and great font choices. I think which one you decide to go with is up to you. I honest...
by lornrocks
Thu Apr 28, 2016 4:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three
Replies: 16
Views: 4167

Re: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three

First off, I love all four of your roughs. I love how pink and bright they are! Definitely a 180 from the current layout. I do wonder if they're too...specific? Like, your illustrations are really cute, but idk what they have to do with GRC per se. Maybe if you did an illustration more reminiscent o...