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by dbranby
Wed May 11, 2016 10:38 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Three - Final Critique
Replies: 1
Views: 906

Project Three - Final Critique

OK, I've built out the TMCC redesign ... check it out under "Project Three" on the link at the bottom of my portfolio page. Special thanks to Remi, Joe, and Denise for curating the student artwork I borrowed for the slide show ... muchas gracias! http://grc175.com/student/spring_2016/david...
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:55 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three
Replies: 16
Views: 4177

Re: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three

I'm really liking your Rough One version ... nice clean, legible, and fun presentation of the content that would appeal to men as well as women. Good luck with your build-out!
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:53 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim_Kami
Replies: 13
Views: 3670

Re: Project 3 Prelim_Kami

Version Two captures the marketing emphasis that the assignment is calling for, so I'd say run with that version. Rough or not, it show some nice thinking, and some "end results" ... I love the image of the soon-to-be graduate prepping for commencement! Good luck on your build!
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:52 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum
Replies: 12
Views: 4113

Re: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum

These comps rock, as always. I prefer the "Think Visually" version for its marketing focus, and I'm really looking forward to seeing you code it out! Good luck!
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:50 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Skeletons
Replies: 13
Views: 3636

Re: Project 3 Skeletons

Looking forward to seeing you "flesh out" these skeletons! For starters, I think I prefer the green version because color-wise, it has a link to the TMCC brand. I'd like to see you integrate more photographs into your designs -- it's a quick way to add color and texture, and besides, peopl...
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:46 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project3 preliminary critique
Replies: 12
Views: 3375

Re: Project3 preliminary critique

Hey, Remi! Gotta say I like the Universe version better, as it is more cohesive page-to-page and picks up the TMCC brand vibe nicely. Good luck with your build-out!
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:45 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 3895

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

Nice start! I prefer your second design version as a cleaner, more corporate presentation of the TMCC GRC program. Good luck with your build-out -- and if I had any student work to share, I'd be happy to share it!
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:43 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 3639

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Nice start! I prefer version one, and can imagine you making it even more visual with vibrant photos and perhaps a splashy color theme. Looking forward to seeing it "made real" with code! Good luck!
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:42 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 4338

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique

Really strong design work ... I particularly like the award show version, as that is a real highlight in any designer's career, and helps the viewer see his/her future in the field. I'm excited to see you build it out!
by dbranby
Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:40 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: GRC site roughs
Replies: 9
Views: 2544

Re: GRC site roughs

I like how you've experimented with some different looks and gotten outside of your comfort zone. Personally, I think the geometric with the white and gold is interesting, and wondering if you could tie the geometric elements to the craft of design/graphic communications a bit more ... showing our i...