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by sarah.alvarado
Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:28 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2766

Project 2 Preliminary Critique

I decided to diverge from the norm and redesign a site based on esoteric angel knowledge. The site http://kimbasangels.com/ features some relatively compelling information on a boring, outdated web page. So far my two designs both feature similar color palettes with different layouts. I wanted to cr...
by sarah.alvarado
Mon Feb 27, 2017 8:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Design
Replies: 8
Views: 1817

Project 1 Final Design

Hello everyone! I decided to go with my second design. I made quite a few smaller changes to my webpage and included something that I had created a while back. I also messed around with the placement of my profile image and added in an 'about me' tag to make the page a bit more organized so that the...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 9:46 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Critique
Replies: 4
Views: 1179

Re: Project 1 Critique

Hello Courtney, I am really liking the second design. Like BreeAnn stated, I too think that the monochromatic color choice works better than the primary colors. I would suggest making your bio text center justified and move your 'about me' text and kitty picture to be centered with your text. I also...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 5:05 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1784

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique

Hello Eduardo, Your second design is very eye catching and exciting! I really enjoy your use of color as well! The shapes used give me a sense of motion, drawing my eyes toward your body text and combined with the color give me the feel of electricity. I would suggest darkening the color of your nam...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 5:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project_1_home page
Replies: 8
Views: 1529

Re: project_1_home page

Hello Kevin, I am drawn to your second design more so than the first. Your color choices for the background are nice however the color of the font makes the words a bit hard to read. I would suggest darkening the text and looking for a color that contrasts a bit better. Your font choices are nice bu...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 4:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: rough_1 and rough_2
Replies: 6
Views: 1476

Re: rough_1 and rough_2

Hello Elizabeth, I really enjoy your second design! Your main image is very nicely rendered and adds a great visual. The color of your text is a nice contrast against the background and surprisingly easy to read. I would suggest moving your nav bar up since it took me a moment to find exactly where ...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 4:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1812

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique

Hello Stephanie, Your designs are looking great! I am really enjoying the second layout. It has a contemporary yet comfortable feel that is, in my opinion, very hard to achieve. I really don't have anything I could suggest that would make it look better since it is already looking like a complete we...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 4:47 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Project 1
Replies: 8
Views: 1722

Re: Preliminary Project 1

Hi Michele, I am really liking your use of color in both of the designs however your second design is working better for me. I would suggest decreasing saturation on the red you are using so that it isn't as 'fire engine red'. Also, your nav bar is looking a little empty as well. I think it would he...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 4:42 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 Jared Harper
Replies: 8
Views: 1770

Re: project 1 Jared Harper

Hello Jared, Your designs are looking fantastic! Personally I really like the first one due to the fact that you have very little white. Your colors work very nicely together and are eye-catching as well! Everything looks to have it's own place so it also has a 'complete' feel to me. Great job and I...
by sarah.alvarado
Tue Feb 14, 2017 4:38 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project #1 - Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 10
Views: 2392

Re: Project #1 - Preliminary Roughs

Hello Ed, I am really liking both of your designs but I am personally drawn to the first one. The background image is really eye-catching and contrasts nicely with your blue gradient. Blue is also a very calming color so I think it works very nicely for an informational webpage. I think it may be be...