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by ZeraOtaku
Tue Mar 21, 2017 4:46 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 rough Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 2084

Project 2 rough Critique

Hey guys, sorry it took so long this website http://www.arngren.net/ was a lot more difficult than i thought it was going to be. Let me know what you guys think.

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This is the search page
This is the search page
This is page where it gives you info about the product and the price
This is page where it gives you info about the product and the price
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:07 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final Design
Replies: 8
Views: 1768

Re: Project 1 - Final Design

Hi Stephanie!
Love your layout and how simple and easy it is to navigate through, I would say play with your margins a little bit.
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 8
Views: 1719

Re: Project 1 Final

Hi Brandon!

Looks great the colors and the layout work so smoothly together! however your headline is to small and doesn't really stand out to much.
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:00 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 9
Views: 2025

Re: Project 1 Final

Hey Jared!

Love your colors and your layout, but it is really hard to your text.
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:58 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 final design
Replies: 7
Views: 1723

Re: Project 1 final design

hey Ed!
I love the old school 50's feel of this design and I love the colors they look great! I would say it's really hard to ready your type on your body, maybe make it bolder.
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:54 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Design
Replies: 8
Views: 1876

Re: Project 1 Final Design

Hi Sarah!!

Why must you make me jelly!! lol Love your design! Everything works great together. I would say play with body text a little it just seems a little too small to me, other wise it looks great!
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:51 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 8
Views: 1863

Re: Project 1 Final

Hi Grace!

I love you design! The colors, the layout, they just work great together! My only critique would be is maybe play around with the fonts a little bit more on your tabs they just seems a little to jumble.
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:37 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 8
Views: 1846

Re: Project 1 Final

Hi Michele!

I love your color choices! Can't beat the classic red, black and white color scheme. My advise is work the headline a bit more, there's just a lot of wasted space.
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: final_rough
Replies: 8
Views: 2003

Re: final_rough

Hi Elizabeth!

I think your design is really cute! I would fix the body text, the alignment is sporadic.
by ZeraOtaku
Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:23 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Design Project 1
Replies: 7
Views: 1582

Re: Final Design Project 1

Hi Ivor!

I love the 1930's feel, its simple, clean, and to the point. I would change the body text it's really hard to read, maybe make it bolder or bigger, But great over all!