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- Thu Apr 27, 2017 3:58 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 preliminary
- Replies: 6
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Project 3 preliminary
Please see my two preliminary design options.
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 4:23 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Prelim project 2
- Replies: 2
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Prelim project 2
I chose http://mountainmusicparlor.com/. I'm having a difficult time choosing between the two background images; I really like them both. I chose to overlay the image on prelim 2 onto distressed wood, which I could also do to the warmer image in prelim 1.
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 9:10 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: preliminary project 2
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2569
Re: preliminary project 2
I quite like the American flag text logo you designed. I think you might not need the additional flag and eagle/flag images. I like the b/w food slicer images, but might have a variety of different pieces of equipment. Not sure about the purple in the navigation buttons; I think I'd like it better i...
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:18 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2897
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
I love this background image, it's totally ethereal and dreamy and fitting. I feel like the name gets lost in the logo redesign; I actually don't mind her original logo and I even think that the gold color of it would fit nicely right in place of the gray one; there's plenty of gold in that backgrou...
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:12 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique EG
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1764
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique EG
Wow, that original website really was shit! Your swirly silhouette top bar is pretty cool. I'd like to see the 007 logo still in this design somewhere. I think the black/white/gray color scheme is fitting and I like the image you chose. I'm not sold on your typeface choices in your navigation or add...
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:22 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2672
Re: Project 2 Preliminary
I like homepage_2 best. I love that image with the big gorgeous grill and I like the taupe color you pulled from it. I'm not sold on the rust color you chose in the navigation (as on Gallery); I think you could maybe pull a red out of that badge on the home image. I also think you could stick with a...
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:13 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2611
Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique
Nice soothing designs. I think I like the background texture of the second one better; it's more flowy. But I also like that the first design has that nice mountain image which adds some interest. I'm not sold on the tan accent color, I think I'd like just a bit more color pop. The typeface choice f...
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:06 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 prelim crit
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2213
Re: Project 2 prelim crit
Well that second headline, with the little kids holding up the letters, is damn cute! It's darling, and for me it's the winner. I think you're on to something with the fresh fruit background as well, but I think that you need all the 'What is Penny Juice?' text right there on the homepage. I'm not s...
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:56 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: proj_2_prelim_layouts
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2197
Re: proj_2_prelim_layouts
I like the concept of the image with the doors opening to the ocean. I think the black stroke boxes are unnecessary. I think you could play with type a little more on your headline and maybe pull a color from the background image to create navigation buttons.
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:51 am
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: project_#2_rough
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2545
Re: project_#2_rough
I like your logo redesign. I think the purple design is more interesting; I also definitely prefer the script font choice you used in your navigation better than the italics of the other design. On the home page, I think you could make the image larger. On the About Me page, I would like to see the ...