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- Wed Nov 29, 2017 10:23 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project three
- Replies: 6
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project three
Super late, but here are m preliminaries. Still working, but here's what I've got so far
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 4:31 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Preliminary Critique #2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3216
Re: Preliminary Critique #2
I'm definitely going for the blue one, I'm not sure I like the color scheme of the other one, feels a little too old school whereas as the blue one feels modern and inviting. I would suggest adding in some more visual interest though, something to get the viewers attention. Maybe a complementary col...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:37 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2998
Re: Project 2-Preliminary
I like the light version better, but both are a little confusing. Listing characters on the homepage without establishing what it's about is confusing to someone like me who doesn't know what this is for.
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:32 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3112
Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
I would go with the second one, I would recommend using a different font for the bodycopy however, it's a little to creative to read that much in. The color choices are strong. Both still feel a little weird since there are no actual photos though, maybe try working with some photos?
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:28 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3406
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
I would go with the first one, the overall design is really clean and effective. The bright colors are super inviting and refreshing. I like the icons in the second one though, maybe there's a way to combine them? Whichever direction you go will work really well.
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:23 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project Two Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3192
Re: Project Two Prelim
I like two better, I would suggest picking a typeface with more thickness if youre going to put type over an image, the scripty font gets kind of lost. I like you're colors and photos the good job!
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:18 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3135
Re: [Project 2] Preliminary
I like the way the first one looks, type choices are nice as well as color schemes. I don't really get the joke but that's okay. Both feel like they are missing something, maybe adding in a photo or illustration would help fill them out. The second one reminds me of the Reno zombie Crawl designs.
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:12 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3343
Re: Project 2
Either one would work, the only suggestions I have would be to tighten everything up, there is a lot of open space where you don't need it, also for both I would probably move the title a little further down it feels to high up in the layout. Maybe ply with some color choices a little more to preven...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:07 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2845
Re: Project two Layout Roughs
Really good job showing unity through type and color choices, I would go with the first one, I especially like the way the inner page turned out. Really good work.
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:02 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3093
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Either of these would work, they are both strong color-wise and typographically, I tend to go towards the second one a little more just because of the color scheme. For the inside page I'm not sure I like having the nav down low like that, it's unconventional and I'm not sure I would like that on a ...