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by Pearl_Underwood
Mon Nov 27, 2017 5:03 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2762

Re: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique

I really like both. They are both very professional. I am leaning towards the second composition. I like the imagery, and would like to see the second page of the first composition incorporated into the second composition. Great job!
by Pearl_Underwood
Mon Nov 27, 2017 4:41 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project III Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 14
Views: 3081

Re: Project III Roughs, by Francisco

Francisco,

I think they are both visually appealing. I like the colors, and layout of the first option. The second one is also nice, I like the way you incorporated the mascot, but I'm not feeling the #. Other than that, you did a great job!
by Pearl_Underwood
Mon Nov 27, 2017 4:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 rough draft files
Replies: 13
Views: 2908

Re: Project 3 rough draft files

Marco, I really like all your home pages! It's hard to just choose one. I like the color of the Graphic Communication Program, but Graphic is misspelled. :( I do like your third design because it is very clean, and crisp. I think if you lowered the saturation of the green on the others, or tried to ...
by Pearl_Underwood
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:55 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3168

Re: Preliminary Critique

WOW!!! What a difference. I think the first layout is very professional, and easy to read, However, being "artsy", I think the second design is awesome! I think you could go either way. I really like thee second design though.
by Pearl_Underwood
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:51 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 3099

Re: Project 2 Roughs

I love looking at all these critiques because everyone is so talented, and the sites are all unique. I really like both of your sites. The typeface, and layouts are very nice. I am leaning towards the black/pink one. I like the gallery you have, which I have not seen in anyone else's site! Very uniq...
by Pearl_Underwood
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:46 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 3073

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio

Great job! I like the fact that you posted the old website so we could all see. :) I like the first one with the Natgeo colors, and the second is so colorful with the peacock. Both are clean, crisp, and colorful...Very professional! I would go with either one. Nicely done!!!
by Pearl_Underwood
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:43 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 rough
Replies: 9
Views: 2047

Re: Project 2 rough

I like the second page design with the wood theme. Not too sure about the first, seems like there is too much white.
by Pearl_Underwood
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:39 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Prelim Project 2
Replies: 14
Views: 3259

Re: Prelim Project 2

These are both great websites! I do love the colors, and the way that orange pops out. I like the first page with the lady holding her hair. I think either the salon chairs, or the lady with the rollers would do just fine for your second page. The only thing I would work on is the type. I think ther...
by Pearl_Underwood
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:29 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 3113

Re: [Project 2] Preliminary

I think these are both nice, but lacking a logo, or other image. It feels a bit plain to me. I like the darker one, but it seems a little hard to read. I do like the green one because it is easier to read, and the navigation is very user friendly.
by Pearl_Underwood
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:22 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: preliminary
Replies: 13
Views: 3231

Re: preliminary

I saw your originals, and thought they were nice, but i really like the first one. It just is a little more interesting than the second, and the colors just are more striking, and inviting than the second. Good job!