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- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:28 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2
- Replies: 12
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Re: Project 2
Both designs are very nice! I think to top one works a little better though because of the wood background and since it's a wood working shop it's just meant to be. The only think I would change is the type. With the wood background it's a little hard to see. Try playing with font color and size, yo...
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:24 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3167
Re: Preliminary Critique
The first design works much better in both visual appeal and layout. I love the buttons you made for the second page, very sleek! The images and color is nice, but I would really like to see some of the student's work. So far everyone who has done Yale School of Art hasn't shown any sneak peeks of t...
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:20 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
- Replies: 15
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Re: Project 2 Preliminary
SARAH!!! THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I love the green! I think the second version works better in layout but your first one withe imagery and navigation.
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:18 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 rough
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3394
Re: Project 2 rough
Both are good designs, They use imagery and color that scream kid friendly. The layouts are extremely simplified which is great since kids can't usually navigate anything too complex. I feel like you really want to cut down though on body copy though. Children aren't going to want to read a paragrap...
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:14 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
- Replies: 13
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Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
I like the first and third design the best. The both use great color and imagery.
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:12 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3386
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
The first design is beautiful! I love the simple imagery, it reminds me of all the logos and art work I see at the grocery store in the fruit and juice sections.
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:10 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3089
Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
The second design for me looks better, but I really like you logo and navigation bar from the first. Maybe you can combine those and just go overboard with cuteness!
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:08 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2972
Re: Project 2-Preliminary
both designs work well with the game's look and feel. What I think would be cute is to use the angelic home page from the first design but then use the grungy dark theme for the inner pages.
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:06 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3005
Re: Preliminary Critique
The second design looks better however I really like your second page for the first design. Maybe you can find away to mix the two together?
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:04 pm
- Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
- Topic: project_2_roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3188
Re: project_2_roughs
I like the first design better. I would change the navigation though, it feels a little out of place.