Search found 74 matches

by itsdrrlcarden
Wed Nov 27, 2019 2:37 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 prelim roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 3985

Re: Project 4 prelim roughs

I enjoy both concepts, but I do feel like your body copy is a bit large and take up a bit of space. Your imagery choices are good!
by itsdrrlcarden
Wed Nov 27, 2019 2:36 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4: Prelims
Replies: 12
Views: 4236

Re: Project 4: Prelims

I feel based on this project, the yellow design will appeal to a student audience. Both designs are very nice. thou. Good start!
by itsdrrlcarden
Wed Nov 27, 2019 2:34 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary-04-ggu
Replies: 12
Views: 5486

Re: preliminary-04-ggu

Both concepts are nice. Im leaning more towards the blue and grey one, it feel like it is more appealing.
by itsdrrlcarden
Wed Nov 27, 2019 2:33 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 3850

Re: Project 4 Preliminary

I do like your design concepts. I do wish you could've incorporated a different color other than the green, but overall nice design. Font in the body copy seems a bit large to me.
by itsdrrlcarden
Mon Nov 25, 2019 12:35 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 3480

Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique

I like the second one better (the green type one). I feel like the imagery work well with in that design and your font choices are working as well! Good start!
by itsdrrlcarden
Mon Nov 25, 2019 12:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 04 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 3555

Re: Project 04 Preliminary

I like to colorful design. It is more interesting and would attract more users. I would think more about layout. Also, the body copy line length is a bit short, makes it hard to read. Good imagery.
by itsdrrlcarden
Mon Nov 25, 2019 12:30 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 Preliminary-Katelyn Brooke
Replies: 11
Views: 3431

Re: Project 4 Preliminary-Katelyn Brooke

I like the color of your designs, the work well together. Your font is working with the design, i would just work on line spacing, line length, and make sure you watch out for orphans and widows in the title and body copy. Overall, good start!
by itsdrrlcarden
Mon Nov 18, 2019 7:23 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 premil
Replies: 12
Views: 3778

Project 4 premil

Here is my project 4 prelims. I tried to stay away from the typical TMCC green and make the design more interesting.
by itsdrrlcarden
Mon Nov 18, 2019 6:06 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: PROJECT 3 FINAL
Replies: 9
Views: 2006

PROJECT 3 FINAL

by itsdrrlcarden
Wed Nov 06, 2019 7:33 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2 final
Replies: 10
Views: 11826

Project 2 final

I didn't know we had to post our finished website on the forum, but I did post using the FTP on time! http://www.grc175.com/student/fall-2019/darrell-carden/