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by kvonarx
Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 drafts (from Nicole Medrano)
Replies: 22
Views: 4960

Re: Project 1 drafts (from Nicole Medrano)

HI Nicole,
Your first concept is my favorite of the two. I think if you added some color to the four blank shapes that would really give your homepage some flare. Nice work!
by kvonarx
Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project #1 roughts
Replies: 22
Views: 5530

Re: Project #1 roughts

Jose, nice concepts! I really like the first with the silhouette of the mountain climber. Great color and contrast.
by kvonarx
Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:43 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)
Replies: 18
Views: 4253

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Cool concept with the bubble gum bubbles in 3 frames. Excellent use of color and contrast.
by kvonarx
Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Justin Hubert
Replies: 22
Views: 4953

Re: Justin Hubert

Justin, The first layout is organized well and I think the color choices blend nicely. Your second layout with the downtown image is really clean, although I think the positioning of the text just above your navigation buttons could be staggered differently without the overlap. Overall really great ...
by kvonarx
Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick
Replies: 25
Views: 6251

Re: Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick

Both of your designs are very cool. The layering of the separate images creates a lot of depth.
by kvonarx
Fri Feb 15, 2013 7:54 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: mark pederson project 1 roughs
Replies: 17
Views: 4304

Re: mark pederson project 1 roughs

Hi Mark,
I think both of your roughs are visually interesting and the second one is the better layout for your home page. The second one has a lot more variety and dimension, nice work.