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by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:39 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: preliminary-critique-gennesisg
Replies: 14
Views: 2376

Re: preliminary-critique-gennesisg

Hi Genesis,

I like both your designs. The logo looks great too. I personally find the first one easier to read since the yellow can be a little bit out there especially if used for the entire page. Otherwise, great organization on both
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:37 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 17
Views: 2750

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Mackenzie,

Love your illustrations. I think the second looks nicer. It really draws the eye to the page.
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:36 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Prelim Critique - Project 01
Replies: 17
Views: 2883

Re: Prelim Critique - Project 01

Hi Kaitlin,

I really like the colors on your designs. I personally find the first one super nice because of the graphic. It looks organized and easier to read than the darker version. Great job
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:34 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 critique 1
Replies: 15
Views: 2866

Re: project 1 critique 1

Hi Charmaine,

I like both your designs. The second one looks more unique and I think orange is more inviting than green so that's the design that looks nicer to me personally.
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 preliminary critique
Replies: 16
Views: 2895

Re: Project 1 preliminary critique

Hi Sandra,

I like the nature theme of your designs. I think the 2nd one looks better because the colors are a little calmer on the eyes. I do think you could experiment with other fonts a bit more. Otherwise, looks nice.
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:31 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique Roughs
Replies: 17
Views: 3104

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique Roughs

Hi Nalani,

I like the contrast of colors between your designs. I think the second one seems more readable because it's lighter but the layout on the first one a bit more interesting to me. Maybe try to mix and match those elements and see how that might look.
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01_darth
Replies: 14
Views: 2255

Re: Project01_darth

Hello Juan,

Both your designs look pretty cool. I personally prefer the second one because it looks cleaner and more organized but with the graphic from the first one because it's just a more interesting photo. Nice job.
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:25 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 16
Views: 2600

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Hi Taylor,

I like the simplicity of your designs. I think the second one works better I think because the first one kind of has a clash of too many bright colors. Other than that, the organization looks good.
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:23 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 roughs Brandon_P
Replies: 17
Views: 3199

Re: Project 1 roughs Brandon_P

Hi Brandon, I really like how clean your designs are. They're easily readable and very nice to look at. I do prefer the first one but like the second one because it looks a bit more personalized comparing the photos that were used. I think you can experiment with that a little more. Otherwise, super...
by Paula B
Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:20 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 17
Views: 2935

Re: Project One - Preliminary Critique

Hi Jesse, I like the contrast between the two designs and how you made them really different to test out what they look like. Personally, I find the second one nicer looking because it looks more organized. I think you just have to adjust where your lines are especially with the blocks of text and a...