Hi Genesis,
I like both your designs. The logo looks great too. I personally find the first one easier to read since the yellow can be a little bit out there especially if used for the entire page. Otherwise, great organization on both
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- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:39 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: preliminary-critique-gennesisg
- Replies: 14
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- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:37 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2750
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Mackenzie,
Love your illustrations. I think the second looks nicer. It really draws the eye to the page.
Love your illustrations. I think the second looks nicer. It really draws the eye to the page.
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:36 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Prelim Critique - Project 01
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2883
Re: Prelim Critique - Project 01
Hi Kaitlin,
I really like the colors on your designs. I personally find the first one super nice because of the graphic. It looks organized and easier to read than the darker version. Great job
I really like the colors on your designs. I personally find the first one super nice because of the graphic. It looks organized and easier to read than the darker version. Great job
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:34 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1 critique 1
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2866
Re: project 1 critique 1
Hi Charmaine,
I like both your designs. The second one looks more unique and I think orange is more inviting than green so that's the design that looks nicer to me personally.
I like both your designs. The second one looks more unique and I think orange is more inviting than green so that's the design that looks nicer to me personally.
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 preliminary critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2895
Re: Project 1 preliminary critique
Hi Sandra,
I like the nature theme of your designs. I think the 2nd one looks better because the colors are a little calmer on the eyes. I do think you could experiment with other fonts a bit more. Otherwise, looks nice.
I like the nature theme of your designs. I think the 2nd one looks better because the colors are a little calmer on the eyes. I do think you could experiment with other fonts a bit more. Otherwise, looks nice.
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:31 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique Roughs
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3104
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique Roughs
Hi Nalani,
I like the contrast of colors between your designs. I think the second one seems more readable because it's lighter but the layout on the first one a bit more interesting to me. Maybe try to mix and match those elements and see how that might look.
I like the contrast of colors between your designs. I think the second one seems more readable because it's lighter but the layout on the first one a bit more interesting to me. Maybe try to mix and match those elements and see how that might look.
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:28 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01_darth
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2255
Re: Project01_darth
Hello Juan,
Both your designs look pretty cool. I personally prefer the second one because it looks cleaner and more organized but with the graphic from the first one because it's just a more interesting photo. Nice job.
Both your designs look pretty cool. I personally prefer the second one because it looks cleaner and more organized but with the graphic from the first one because it's just a more interesting photo. Nice job.
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:25 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2600
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Hi Taylor,
I like the simplicity of your designs. I think the second one works better I think because the first one kind of has a clash of too many bright colors. Other than that, the organization looks good.
I like the simplicity of your designs. I think the second one works better I think because the first one kind of has a clash of too many bright colors. Other than that, the organization looks good.
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:23 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 roughs Brandon_P
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3199
Re: Project 1 roughs Brandon_P
Hi Brandon, I really like how clean your designs are. They're easily readable and very nice to look at. I do prefer the first one but like the second one because it looks a bit more personalized comparing the photos that were used. I think you can experiment with that a little more. Otherwise, super...
- Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:20 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2935
Re: Project One - Preliminary Critique
Hi Jesse, I like the contrast between the two designs and how you made them really different to test out what they look like. Personally, I find the second one nicer looking because it looks more organized. I think you just have to adjust where your lines are especially with the blocks of text and a...