Hi guys,
Here is my final project 4! I played around with scripts. Let me know what you think!
http://www.grc175.com/student/fall-2019 ... /project4/
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- Wed Dec 11, 2019 3:58 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 4 Final
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1011
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:25 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 04 Prelim
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3997
Re: Project 04 Prelim
Hey there,
I really like your second concept, with the collage! They are both simple and clean. Also, the typography is easy to read. Maybe you can play around with some color?
I really like your second concept, with the collage! They are both simple and clean. Also, the typography is easy to read. Maybe you can play around with some color?
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:24 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 4 prelim roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3985
Re: Project 4 prelim roughs
Hey there,
Oooh I really like the concept with the pencils! That is super creative! Even the colors work nicely together. You can probably make your title bigger, so it pops out!
Oooh I really like the concept with the pencils! That is super creative! Even the colors work nicely together. You can probably make your title bigger, so it pops out!
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:23 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 4 premil
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3776
Re: Project 4 premil
Hey there,
I really like both layouts, but I think I like your second concept better. The color you picked is super unique and inviting. Plus, the imagery plays off nicely! I'm not sure if you need that glow around "Apply Now". Maybe just make it a different color or underline it?
I really like both layouts, but I think I like your second concept better. The color you picked is super unique and inviting. Plus, the imagery plays off nicely! I'm not sure if you need that glow around "Apply Now". Maybe just make it a different color or underline it?
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:21 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project_04_prelim
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3924
Re: Project_04_prelim
Hey there,
I think I'm leaning towards the blue design because I like the imagery you've chosen for it. They are both nice and clean! Maybe you can incorporate more color instead of just focusing on one. It may make it more expressive.
I think I'm leaning towards the blue design because I like the imagery you've chosen for it. They are both nice and clean! Maybe you can incorporate more color instead of just focusing on one. It may make it more expressive.
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:19 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project_4_preliminary_critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3332
Re: project_4_preliminary_critique
I like both concepts, but I think I'm leaning towards the computer one. The other one has great imagery, but seems almost too pretty for the program, but both look great! Maybe just make your text smaller in the buttons? Seems a tad tight.
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:16 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 4: Prelims
- Replies: 12
- Views: 4236
Re: Project 4: Prelims
Hey Mackenzie,
I really like your layout on your second design! It is clean, but readable. But, I also like the images from your first designs as well. Maybe mix them together?
I really like your layout on your second design! It is clean, but readable. But, I also like the images from your first designs as well. Maybe mix them together?
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:14 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: preliminary-04-ggu
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5486
Re: preliminary-04-ggu
Hey there! I really like the second concept! It is super eye catching and represents what graphic design is. I also like the colors and how well they play off of the photos. I would just watch out for you body copy. It is a little tight!
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:12 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3480
Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique
Hi there! I really like the first design! That is a super cool way to represent the program with the imagery you've chosen. You can probably add some expressive text to play off the colorful images.
- Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:09 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 4 Preliminary
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3850
Re: Project 4 Preliminary
Hey there! I really like both designs and how they are branded to TMCC. You definitely captured the feel of the school. I think for your second design you can just overlay the text on top of the photo without the box! All in all, great job!