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by katyroses
Wed Dec 11, 2019 3:58 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 Final
Replies: 2
Views: 1011

Project 4 Final

Hi guys,
Here is my final project 4! I played around with scripts. Let me know what you think!
http://www.grc175.com/student/fall-2019 ... /project4/
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:25 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 04 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 3997

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Hey there,
I really like your second concept, with the collage! They are both simple and clean. Also, the typography is easy to read. Maybe you can play around with some color?
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:24 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 prelim roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 3985

Re: Project 4 prelim roughs

Hey there,
Oooh I really like the concept with the pencils! That is super creative! Even the colors work nicely together. You can probably make your title bigger, so it pops out!
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:23 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 premil
Replies: 12
Views: 3776

Re: Project 4 premil

Hey there,
I really like both layouts, but I think I like your second concept better. The color you picked is super unique and inviting. Plus, the imagery plays off nicely! I'm not sure if you need that glow around "Apply Now". Maybe just make it a different color or underline it?
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:21 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project_04_prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 3924

Re: Project_04_prelim

Hey there,
I think I'm leaning towards the blue design because I like the imagery you've chosen for it. They are both nice and clean! Maybe you can incorporate more color instead of just focusing on one. It may make it more expressive.
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:19 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_4_preliminary_critique
Replies: 10
Views: 3332

Re: project_4_preliminary_critique

I like both concepts, but I think I'm leaning towards the computer one. The other one has great imagery, but seems almost too pretty for the program, but both look great! Maybe just make your text smaller in the buttons? Seems a tad tight.
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:16 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4: Prelims
Replies: 12
Views: 4236

Re: Project 4: Prelims

Hey Mackenzie,

I really like your layout on your second design! It is clean, but readable. But, I also like the images from your first designs as well. Maybe mix them together?
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:14 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary-04-ggu
Replies: 12
Views: 5486

Re: preliminary-04-ggu

Hey there! I really like the second concept! It is super eye catching and represents what graphic design is. I also like the colors and how well they play off of the photos. I would just watch out for you body copy. It is a little tight!
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:12 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 3480

Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique

Hi there! I really like the first design! That is a super cool way to represent the program with the imagery you've chosen. You can probably add some expressive text to play off the colorful images.
by katyroses
Tue Nov 26, 2019 11:09 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 3850

Re: Project 4 Preliminary

Hey there! I really like both designs and how they are branded to TMCC. You definitely captured the feel of the school. I think for your second design you can just overlay the text on top of the photo without the box! All in all, great job!