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by hmayooo
Thu Mar 05, 2020 6:49 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 1717

Re: Project 01 Final

Nice changes, I think your photos are integrated a lot more nicely in this version. I agree that you could probably center your navigation buttons or put more space in between each of them since your header bar is so wide. I also still think you could use a title or logo of some sort, personally I l...
by hmayooo
Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:25 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 10
Views: 1980

Re: Project One Final

All the shapes and angles in this are really cool and overall work pretty well together. I’m not sure if this was intentional but I’d like to see the same angles on the black box your name is in on the mobile version as it is on the desktop version, but other than that it looks really nice! Good job.
by hmayooo
Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 2170

Re: Project 01 Final

I love how simple but creative this is! You definitely put some personality into it. The only thing I can think of to change (and this is really nitpicking) is that I would decrease the weight of your bar separating the projects from the circle bit, it looks a little heavy in my opinion. Overall gre...
by hmayooo
Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one Final
Replies: 10
Views: 2605

Re: Project one Final

Your illustration looks awesome! The whole theme is really unique. I agree with you that some text boxes might be helpful but I think also you may be able to play around with placing your text in the black areas of the design instead (at least in the desktop version, not sure if you’d have room in t...
by hmayooo
Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one final
Replies: 11
Views: 1947

Re: project one final

This looks awesome, I really like the changes and that you can see the logo more clearly. I think the only thing I would change is the placement of the TMCC logo, right now it looks a little out of place since half of it is inside that darkened footer area, and half of it is outside. Other than that...
by hmayooo
Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:06 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 final
Replies: 11
Views: 1908

Re: project 1 final

I really love this design, it has an appealing dark theme without being too heavy. I agree that the sidebar on the mobile version looks a little awkward, maybe if you placed the links in the sidebar it may look a little more like it’s supposed to be there. Good job!
by hmayooo
Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1
Replies: 11
Views: 2098

Re: Project 1

Your final designs look really good! Really clean and professional. I would’ve liked to see an actual photo in there that kinda goes along with the color scheme but overall I like your improvements.
by hmayooo
Sat Feb 29, 2020 8:11 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 2105

Project 1 Final

Hi! Here is my final design for project 1. I went with the blue/green design since everyone seemed to like that one a little more, and I changed some of my fonts and added the TMCC logo. Hope you like! Here are the helpful links I used: https://thenextweb.com/dd/2015/06/09/7-pillars-of-minimalist-we...
by hmayooo
Thu Feb 13, 2020 7:24 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Rough Drafts
Replies: 12
Views: 2277

Re: Project 1 Rough Drafts

These designs are super bright and fun, and honestly I like both almost equally! Your use of transparency in the blocks in the sunflower design add a nice modern look. The texture and color of the yellow design really catches the eye, but I think after a while it can be a little too bright and hard ...
by hmayooo
Thu Feb 13, 2020 7:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2448

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

I like your color choices in both designs, but I think the navigation bar in the rough2 designs is a better choice as it creates a little more balance in combination with the wide frame picture of the mountains as your header. I would really like to see more of a title on the designs; when I visit a...