Project3 preliminary critique

[gr8ful1]

I like both of your designs, but I prefer the second space one. It feels more cohesive page-to-page to me, and is more visually interesting. I am having a hard time reading your lists of classes though, even zoomed in to normal screen size the font is too small to read. I think you have room to make it bigger though. I like the use of the graphic in the middle to contain the class listings.
Your first design is solid also, just more traditional. I feel like the color scheme doesn't flow to the second page very well though, maybe try to incorporate more of the main blue from the first page into it. I also think the DNA graphic reminds me more of biology than graphic design, so maybe something a little more artsy would work better. Good Job!

[dzynecin88]

First of all - you don't have to ask forgiveness! It could have happened to anyone, and actually, I'm surprised it wasn't me! I seem to have found every techie snafu there is during my time in this program.

I think both your designs are very good and could go either way, but I'm enjoying the fresh colors in your first design. I like the way you've kept the pages clean but interesting with your use of shape of color. I think I may be getting tired of the black and puke green of TMCC's color scheme, although I like your high contrast, universe effect you've applied to the second design.

[ariaaearnest]

Hey Remi!

I really love you second design! It looks very stylish and clean. I would just lower the transparency on the star background so the text is easier to read.

Aria