Project One Critique _Lea

[Jose_M]

Ltrueworthy,
The space home page is a lot better. It looks more like a web page more than the second one because it has a stronger layout and color combination. What it needs to improve on is font styles because the current font styles are flat and don't do you any justice. If you decide to go with the second home page, some research will be required for page layout and composition.


Jose Macias.

[erika.murray]

I like the first website better for many reasons - your headline typeface matches the theme better, there is less space taken up by purple rectangles, and it is as if you are the space cadet due to the placement of your information and name.
The second is good, but the typefaces are rather plain and the TMCC logo is too dominant. The animals are cute but I'm not sure how it ties into the theme.

[breezy]

Hey,

I love the first one, it has great balance between text, color, layout, and objects. Good job all around!

[SerenDark]

http://www.grc175.com/forum/download/fi ... &mode=view
I prefer this design version over all of your designs.
My only real issue with it is that the "About Me" text is plain; what if you made it the space font similar to the nav buttons? It's also not quite center aligned within its space, with the body copy.
Your second design, the cat one, feels crowded and inconsistent, particularly in the top "banner" part. The cute graphics are in different visual styles and don't really fit together in this regard, and their spacing could use some work though particularly your email text.

[darian_p]

The one with that cats looks very nice. The only thing I would change with that is the images of the collar and food dish. I feel it takes up a little too much space so i would make it smaller. It would also give you more space for images and body copy if needed.

[Marco_Horta1]

hey!

this is very nice work, those rough samples are very colorful and eye catching, I like version 4 rev 2 it feel friendly and easier to follow very nice color selection.

my suggestion it's to play with the body paragraph to make it more attractive.

[JulianEmme]

I like the space one much better, I'm not sure if I get what the cat one is doing, the space layout is effective and works within the elements of design nicely. The colors are nice and the layout is clear and cohesive.