Project 1 Final

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ktwy
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Project 1 Final

Post by ktwy »

Hi All ~

Here is my final design. I tried to keep it as clean and simplistic as possible, while still incorporating the CMYK theme.
I wanted to make it as easy to navigate as possible, so it will probably look pretty similar on each page once it becomes a website.
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Ariesboxsye
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This feels very photogenic to me, and very artistic as well. The simple color chaps that border the layout and the font used for your last name, as if to apply a signature, really bring this style together. Still need to add a bit for the GRC 175 Web Layout and other details, but I have a good idea where you might be adding those.
~Names Aries Shelley~

Kyler_Rose
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Hey Your Final version is looking nice everything is looking neat and clean, but i you need your real paragraph and not filler text.
Kyler Rose

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susielang
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Post by susielang »

Very nice, clean, artistic layout. Really liking your signature and colors.
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erika.murray
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Post by erika.murray »

I really like the changes you've made to this. Moving the picture to the top left was a good choice, as well as adding the social media to the left side bar. I still feel like you need some more pictures instead of so much text, but that is up to you. Maybe try adding a row of three photos toward the bottom?
Looks great!
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Zera-Chann
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Post by Zera-Chann »

Hey Kristianna,

Love the colors and the layout, I honestly don't have any Critique on this looks great!
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selvster5000
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Post by selvster5000 »

heyya!

The layout is very simple and clean as you intended it to be. I'm fond of your
font choice and I like the cyan strip on the left with the social icons, those add
a nice touch. I do feel though the font needs more weight in the header, just to
separate the body text from the headlines and navigation. Nice work though!
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Hannah Selvey

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darian_p
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I love the layout and colors. Maybe add some more images though. That's a lot of body copy for a home page.
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Post by Instructor »

Ah. You chose the CMYK design. Neat!

I think my favorite part of this one is the interplay between the colors at the top corners. It gives depth to an otherwise, clean, flat composition. Nice use of margins throughout too. I like how you used object distance to create thematic groups throughout this whole thing: over here is the social media, over here is the navigation, etc. Your colors are working well together, but then, that's the point of using CMYK, isn't it? I like your typographic choices as well. Good work using your logo type throughout the design and only using slight variations in weight to establish hierarchy. You've made a nice frame here for use on future other pages too.

The only real design nitpick I can see is that your navigation, bodycopy, and TMCC logo have different right edges.

Great work!
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Peelio
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Post by Peelio »

Hello,
Your design looks great! The incorporation of the image adds a bit of depth to the page. The body copy flow is kind of strange, but will probably be better to tell with the real text in there. The spacing looks great!
Melissa Peel

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