Hi Zera,
I like the modification you have done to your website, your color selections are now better and your texts boxes look more attractive than the previous page, great job. just keep the paragraph about yourself towards a bit higher position.
Final Rough
- Marco_Horta1
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Re: Final Rough
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Marco Horta
Marco Horta
Re: Final Rough
Zera-Chann,
This one is cool and fun to look at. The only things to improve are aligning your bottom right text with the pink containment box and the bottom left content with the links (blue boxes).
This one is cool and fun to look at. The only things to improve are aligning your bottom right text with the pink containment box and the bottom left content with the links (blue boxes).
Jose Macias.
Re: Final Rough
Like your colors and layout, I would change the kerning in your body copy so the type is closer together, right now its halting to read.
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Brianna Mick
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- Pearl_Underwood
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Re: Final Rough
I really like this. Gives a warm, relaxed feeling. The colors are great. simple design, yet very affective. Good job!
~Pearl Underwood~
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Very nicely done!
Simple, but with the added detail you are talking about I feel like it will totally pull everything together
Agree with the type choice in the body copy though, a color change would really help it stand on it's own as a design element.
Simple, but with the added detail you are talking about I feel like it will totally pull everything together
Agree with the type choice in the body copy though, a color change would really help it stand on it's own as a design element.
-Chalyn
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