Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

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selvster5000
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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Post by selvster5000 »

Melissa! I love your layout, the font change and background changes were great
decisions. The "m" definitely stands out more and creates more visual interest
throughout your design. The only thing I noticed is that I might make the font for
the body paragraph and the bottom text a little bigger. But overall nicely done!
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darian_p
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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

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This is much better then the rough! I still feel it would work better though if you centered your name in the blue box above your body copy.
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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

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Peelio,
Turned out great. I like the theme and overall layout. I think it can use an extra layer of body copy somewhere above your personal logo.


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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

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Love the photo you used, I personally would make the body copy and logo/ type at the bottom just a little bigger. Over all love it!
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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

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I really like this! I love the way your "M" pops out with the vibrant colors! Great job!
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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Post by chaytothet »

I love this!

It's a really relaxing design, awesome picture as well.

I think it's very nice as is. No changes :)
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