Preliminary Critique

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darian_p
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Re: Preliminary Critique

Post by darian_p »

The second design looks better however I really like your second page for the first design. Maybe you can find away to mix the two together?
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Re: Preliminary Critique

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Hey,

I really like your layouts, I prefer the second layout better, the navigation is simple and easy to use. I think the design could be more visually interesting especially with a topic like print making! Great job!

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Re: Preliminary Critique

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I'm going to have to agree with Erika. I think the homepage is very colorful, and i love the navigation circles. The images for old town Reno is pretty unique. The navigation on your 2nd design, and second page is pretty unique as well. Great job on both!
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Re: Preliminary Critique

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I like the first layout. The navigation bar is really cool! The website looks very professional and easy to navigate. Maybe make the logo a bit bigger.
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Re: Preliminary Critique

Post by Marco_Horta1 »

Hello,

I like your second design better, this one is cleaner and very easy to navigate, and let us not forget then images says more than a thousand words.
well done,
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Re: Preliminary Critique

Post by chaytothet »

Hey! Awesome job. These are super spiffy. I enjoy the second one better, it seems more too the point. I would maybe look at adding a complementary color in some letters if possible. Just to make it pop a little more.
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