Project 2 - Preliminary Critique

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Which layout is better?

Rough 1
5
71%
Rough 2
2
29%
 
Total votes: 7

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darian_p
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Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique

Post by darian_p »

The first design is beautiful! I love the simple imagery, it reminds me of all the logos and art work I see at the grocery store in the fruit and juice sections.
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Hey,

Over all I love both, very cute! Your second layout is a little more eye catching with the blue in it! Great job!

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I really think both are nice! Very inviting, fresh, colorful, and making me want a glass of OJ! I like the 2nd design. The organization and the way it is laid out.
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I like the first design with all the circles. The colors you chose are very bright, and vibrant and work good for advertising orange juice. Maybe make the type on the nav bar a little bigger.
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Post by chaytothet »

Suuuuuuper cute.

I really like the second design, I feel like it's more simple and to the point.

Lovely use of colors and sizes of elements to form a hierarchy.
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