Hey,
I like your version 2 layout better, margins are a little tight your text but overall great job!
Cheers,
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Brianna Mick
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Wow!!! These two websites are awesome!! I really like the logo on the first one, and the second is pretty organized. I think if you brought the logo to the second website it would be great! Your font, and the colors on both are wonderful. Great job!
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These are wonderful, I love your colors!
I feel like the second is stronger in layout and navigation, but the first has stronger imagery. I wonder what it would look like if you took the banner from the first design and put it where the banner is for the second design?
I feel like the second is stronger in layout and navigation, but the first has stronger imagery. I wonder what it would look like if you took the banner from the first design and put it where the banner is for the second design?
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I like the first one with the green forest, Its a really cool design. Maybe move the text box in a little so its not so close to the side of the web page.
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hello Sarah,
wonderful job, both are good designs I personally go towards the version1. this is more appealing to the viewer's eyes great work.
the only changes I would do is to fine-tune the body paragraphs somehow making a combination between ver1 and ver 2.
wonderful job, both are good designs I personally go towards the version1. this is more appealing to the viewer's eyes great work.
the only changes I would do is to fine-tune the body paragraphs somehow making a combination between ver1 and ver 2.
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I like the second one better for sure!! It's implying the theme, but still keeping things simple. Super awesome work.
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