project three
- JulianEmme
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project three
Super late, but here are m preliminaries. Still working, but here's what I've got so far
Julian Emme
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Re: project three
Overall your websites are coming along, I like the homepage for the second plate but your body pages for both of your designs still need alot of work. With the second body page template the text is hard to read agaist the background.
Kyler Rose
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Re: project three
I like the second design best. I like the font you chose for your nav bar.
Cassandra Bowers
Re: project three
Design 1 feels nice with how airy and open it is and its friendly palette. However, the overall organization can use some work and the bodycopy is quite squished/stretched.
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- Ariesboxsye
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Re: project three
Your first choice has more visual appeal to me, however, be careful of the simplicity of your layout and color pallet.
~Names Aries Shelley~
Re: project three
Hey,
I really like your first layout, it's clean and laid out well, great job!
I really like your first layout, it's clean and laid out well, great job!
"A day without laughter is a day wasted." - Charlie Chaplin
Brianna Mick
Brianna Mick
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Re: project three
I really like the second Idea!
It seems more chill, the other is a little intense with the color choice and the large brain.
It seems more chill, the other is a little intense with the color choice and the large brain.
-Chalyn
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