[Project 3] Preliminary Critique

[Ariesboxsye]

design 2 for me, honestly it feels way more creative and expressive. Speaking of, be very careful about not to go to professional with your second page there.

[breezy]

Hey,

I really like your second layout, it's clean and logically laid out, great job!

[chaytothet]

Hey!

I really like elements from both of your pieces!

I think combining these would work out well. The first has a really straightforward navigation bar and the other has the visual interest in the body.

good luck!