rough draft project1

[jason_hosier]

my resources dont have much to do with my finished project. I just think they are really cool interactive features i would like to use some day. I was inspired by a drawing that i did and i mainly wanted to integrate it into my piece.

Neave interactive game site https://neave.com/


Asgardia orbital micronation https://asgardia.space/en/

Update 09-17-2018

Ive added some work in response to your criticism. please let me know what you think everyone. Thanks.

updated 10-03-2018

template completed. criticism appreciated.

[agostina_renau]

Jason, I missed your art! I am happy I get to see it yet again. Somehow your designs are busy but they work. I think it's because your colors aren't highly saturated and it gives my eyes a break. I like that one design is minimalist and the other one is busier.

[tandyg]

My favorites would be the first layout with the content emphasized with the larger type for the content selection. I enjoy your work.

[Big_DaDdy]

Jason, I really like the third one down the best brother, looks clean.
The others feel a bit busy for me and maybe selecting a color pallet to work with would help create a consistency in color for your layouts.

[emilyduke]

Hey Jason!

I am definitely drawn to the last two layouts, I think the simplicity of them are really unique. I like the colors chosen a lot. I think your art is special and unique and I suggest trying to utilize that more in your web/mobile designs as an extension of yourself and leave out the selfie. Otherwise, good job!

[tweetysmurf2350]

Both designs are really interesting but I am more drawn to the second of the two designs. They are very visually interesting.

Hope this helps,
Terri

[Drakula]

Hi Jason,

I like them all! The last one sticks out to me the most, it has a very personal touch. I like how you included surprise elements through out your designs with the clips of your eye ect, I wasn't expecting that. Great job!

[evexhouses]

I love that you use so much color! It makes your art super lively and exciting! I would recommend not putting random shapes with drastic color choices behind large bits of text, it makes it kind of hard to read! Great Job!

[Jones]

The last two options are easier for my eyes to digest. I like the colors you chose, and the image on the last one is really fun.

[Stasiavous]

Hi Jason! I'd have to say the first one is my favorite. I would remove the transparent circle behind your paragraph though. I'm not sure what it's purpose is and it's distracting. The colors are awesome and I like your description as well. The typefaces you chose are spot on.