Project 1 Preliinary Critique

[Zera-Chann]

Hey Girl! love you ideas! it just feels a bit rushed and not really done.

best of luck!

[giusti56]

Hi, I really like the bottom design and like the pattern with the trees. I think it works really well. I feel it is unfinished and I think more time with the layout and type will help it.

[Tickosity]

I like the first two designs, they are fun and easy to read. However I would like to see something a bit brighter to highlight areas of importance, but that's probably just me.

[matt]

I like the ticket layout the most. reminds me of going to the movie. you can do a lot with the concept. Interested to see where this goes : )